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Free verse № 36861

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by INTRANSIT

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Jan 2003 · 6 comments

Dandelion Dandelion come out and play. If you can't play today, I'll have to wait 'till may. A dumb little turtle in a dumb little shell rolled over on his back and blamed that he fell.

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[n/a] poemwanker 18-Jan-03/10:47 AM Reply
Have a break. Have a KitKat.

And then read my poem 'Who Flamed Roger Rabbit', and then realise that Bobjim the bloody second has plagiarised it!
[7] Jeremi B. Handrinos 18-Jan-03/11:13 AM Reply
Ahhhh ha ha ha...you're insane! i haVE ABSOLutely no clue as to what in the hell this is about and it's right there in front of me... nice curve ball.
[1] wOrnella Mutiw 18-Jan-03/2:00 PM Reply
What the hell are you talking about? Also, turtles are not dumb. I have a friend who has one....a lovely creature named Tutu.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › wOrnella Mutiw 18-Jan-03/2:34 PM Reply
2 separate poems, written when I was 6yrs old. Tortles are not dumb. When they pick up off the floor, they're quite quick. Nor are Iguanae or goldfish for that matter.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › INTRANSIT 18-Jan-03/2:34 PM Reply
turtles, tortles, lets call the whole thing off.
[4] nentwined 19-Jan-03/4:01 AM Reply
'till is spelled more properly 'til (as it's short for until, not untill)

I can't say I really get either of these, or them together, nor the title.