on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2004, 4:04 PM
I feel the same way about so many people, but I find it's the little things I can do which seem to make the most difference. This poem strikes chords in my heart. It's not the best I've read here, but it has a special meaning for me. Thank You.
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2004, 4:13 PM
Going thru' the graveyard in Stole Kansas?
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2004, 4:16 PM
FANTASTIC, I just tried my first acrostic the other day, check it out. Loved this.
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2004, 4:19 PM
Something about the snow and blue salt? Repititions from the previous one of yours I read. I liked it better.No particular reason, just seemed to flow better in my head.
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2004, 4:22 PM
Did she win?, Or saving herself for another day?
on some deleted poem
17 Sep 2004, 4:33 PM
Try to rework it, I like the content well enough, but it sounds broken when I read it.
on Flying things by INTRANSIT
27 Sep 2004, 1:36 PM
Where ya bin? Haven't heard from ya in a while. Thought maybe you drove your truck to Cuba or something. How'd you get the plane down at the chicken farm?
on some deleted poem
8 Oct 2004, 7:02 PM
Welcome to the world. I can't believe you'd do anything worth getting yelled at tho'. Good expression/vent.
on Nothing's Forever by cuddlytiger17
8 Oct 2004, 7:03 PM
Nothing like a nice hot shower huh?
on some deleted poem
24 Oct 2004, 7:24 PM
Stanza 2 line 3, Eternal bliss, ?? Only if we're lucky--- I mean worthy. Can you say dead? Probably in a more poetic manner.
A good message tho'. Are any one of us truly ready? I think my dad was. Heck I know he was. But I'm a long ways away from being that good of a man. Still; I can hope that I inherited it.
A good message tho'. Are any one of us truly ready? I think my dad was. Heck I know he was. But I'm a long ways away from being that good of a man. Still; I can hope that I inherited it.
on some deleted poem
24 Oct 2004, 7:35 PM
DAMN, Dan
Damn.
I need say no more.
Damn.
I need say no more.
on some deleted poem
24 Oct 2004, 7:43 PM
Well, hell! I was going to give you advice. But now?...
on Transposed by <{Baba^Yaga}>
24 Oct 2004, 7:54 PM
Just stopped by to return the favor. If it's any consolation I don't care for your collection of meaningless shit than you do for mine, but I don't take the time to log in to my multiple personalities
and give you more than one score. Just one, from me.
I have seen a few things in your words that have made me stop to think, but you aren't running a really good race in life. I'm not a psycologist, but if you are really the way you are, you need one. he he heee...
and give you more than one score. Just one, from me.
I have seen a few things in your words that have made me stop to think, but you aren't running a really good race in life. I'm not a psycologist, but if you are really the way you are, you need one. he he heee...
on What is a poet by INTRANSIT
26 Oct 2004, 8:53 PM
So true. the part about the poison.
Hey , do me a favor, read my poem into my world, acrostic. Tell me what you think. It made it to the top ten in less than a week. But personally, I think it's kinda weak.
Hey , do me a favor, read my poem into my world, acrostic. Tell me what you think. It made it to the top ten in less than a week. But personally, I think it's kinda weak.
on the coming of Fall by Sasha
26 Oct 2004, 8:57 PM
This rings home for me. I've been asked to come cut down some trees from the Hayman burn area on the Eastern slope Of the Colorado Rockies(Just about 50 miles from my home). Turns out I used to picnic where these people are building a house.
on Turbulence by horus8
27 Oct 2004, 6:31 PM
Here you are again with anoyher f******n 0 on my poetry? I don't make five suedonimmmes of myself to give you hateful scores. WHY?>
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2004, 7:08 PM
I'll red it letter
on some deleted poem
2 Nov 2004, 8:27 PM
And so He dies His ignominious death, or am I mistaken?
on some deleted poem
2 Nov 2004, 8:24 PM
Very well written, and a good reminder to us all. A good thing to consider. Thank you for the refresher course. Nice to see more Catholics on Poem Ranker, for a while there I was all alone.