on some deleted poem
16 Aug 2004, 9:17 PM
Relocation? a well thought piece. enjoy those nocturnal ramblings my friend.
on some deleted poem
16 Aug 2004, 9:20 PM
Life, yet again, in the fold. yes?
on some deleted poem
16 Aug 2004, 9:24 PM
And no man has the power.
Get it right squeek.
Mayby I should include a prayer eh?
Get it right squeek.
Mayby I should include a prayer eh?
on some deleted poem
10 Aug 2004, 10:36 PM
HEY< I hate this too FORK YOU VERY MUCH! you're a sick f__k grow up eh?
Way the by (YER TITLES SUCK TOO!)
Way the by (YER TITLES SUCK TOO!)
on Certain circles by INTRANSIT
10 Aug 2004, 10:47 PM
I grow with these people, as I do with you. DON'T NEGLECT ME!I can always use your help. Please.
on some deleted poem
10 Aug 2004, 10:52 PM
SEXY, as ever babe! Love ya, sorry I've been gone so long. don't be afraid to call 'n' say hey! By the way , e-mail me yer phone #, my phone took a chit
and it took your number w/ it.
and it took your number w/ it.
on Countdown by TearsOnRoses
10 Aug 2004, 10:42 PM
Listen....... Do you hear it? Never count your days. just learn to enjoy them. thanks for you vote on my poem old friends. read some more and tell me what you think. my e-mail is posted. thanks again.
on The Sky and the Pond by somemorepoetry
10 Aug 2004, 10:23 PM
I can only be happy that I decided to come back here tonight. I live in southeast Colorado, And I've seen three tornadoes from my front porc tonight, not to mention the two trees that I saw on fire tonight. I had to wait at one and call the fdp[ because it was just a flamin! Thanks .
on your best friend by New Life Drug
27 Jun 2004, 10:44 PM
He must mean alot.
on Y Tylluanod by Blurgerocity
27 Jun 2004, 10:48 PM
Umm, that's not latin, none of it. Confiteor natura et terra. But the english parts sounded good to my intoxicated mind.
on some deleted poem
27 Jun 2004, 10:55 PM
I would try to take a walk. You write of nothing but love and infatuation, try to expand your horizons, there is so much more to life. And poetry.
on some deleted poem
27 Jun 2004, 10:56 PM
See?
on Desert Rain by donmiguel1960
27 Jun 2004, 11:03 PM
Ahhh metaphore. A region I have not achieved.
l.19, scent?
Stanza 6, I think agai is abused,Just delete the second one, it isn't needed.
Hearts are sad, yearning for the healing to return.
By the way, thanks for the votes and comments my friend.
l.19, scent?
Stanza 6, I think agai is abused,Just delete the second one, it isn't needed.
Hearts are sad, yearning for the healing to return.
By the way, thanks for the votes and comments my friend.
on Exquisite butterflies by donmiguel1960
21 Jun 2004, 8:48 PM
A painful way to live. You really need to quit now, I can't add everything you write to my favorites. on second thought, keep writing. Do you mind if I print a few of yours out?
on I never really knew by donmiguel1960
21 Jun 2004, 8:54 PM
Giving is everything. Read 'I Will Stay' by NoSage. that is my opinion. And yes, it is the truest form of happiness, charity. I have never felt better than when I can be of service to someone in need, and I thank God for giving me the skills necessary to help many people.
on Broken Wings by donmiguel1960
21 Jun 2004, 9:05 PM
For some reason I kept picturing the Holy Spirit. You say you have never written before? what a way to start!
on Goin' For Broke by MacFrantic
21 Jun 2004, 8:13 PM
Busted. Reminds me of a time not too many years ago. I was probably looking for something else tho'.
on Quiet, Kind Hills by Dovina
21 Jun 2004, 8:27 PM
It would seem that you have a solid foundation. Enjoy .
on unbroken bottle by skaskowski
21 Jun 2004, 8:30 PM
So much to imbibe, I fear I must read this one several times. great work.