on some deleted poem
14 Jun 2004, 5:50 PM
Time to move on.
on No choice in the matter by cedand1
21 Jun 2004, 8:00 PM
Yea, we've got a few of those poor fellows here in Colorado Springs too. Sucks to be a statue.
on The Thinker by cedand1
21 Jun 2004, 8:02 PM
Welcome to poem ranker. nice work, kinda nice to see some good poetry from a newby, I really enjoyed this one.
on Sonnetias by MacFrantic
21 Jun 2004, 8:07 PM
So true. Well done.
on some deleted poem
19 Jun 2004, 9:02 AM
Gee, you tend to get attached don't you?
on some deleted poem
19 Jun 2004, 9:04 AM
Speechless, only 'cause I don't know what to say;}
on Phoebus by SupremeDreamer
19 Jun 2004, 9:10 AM
I hope you didn't write this after reading a few of mine last night! So true, no matter how hard we try, we will always reveal at least a part of who we are in whatever we write. I think it is unavoidable, kinda like death.
on A single day by donmiguel1960
19 Jun 2004, 9:16 AM
Death can't be thwarted? other than that, 10, definitely.
on love and hate by jessicasgurl
17 Jun 2004, 4:11 PM
A hater now
on A Flower for Monet by Shuushin
17 Jun 2004, 4:18 PM
Yes Yes, cudos. Very well done
on Obituary for the Moon by wilco
16 Jun 2004, 7:59 PM
You know, I've read this quite a few times now, and I like the first two stanza's, but I lost it or you lost it when you started in on the chorus. Could you try to find what you had when you started this and continue it as more of a poem than a song?
on Summers Breath on my neck by unouluvme
16 Jun 2004, 7:48 PM
Good image though, I guess you aren't as bad a poet as you think.
on West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco
16 Jun 2004, 9:39 PM
Yea, the original was better, the repetition just doesn't work here.
on some deleted poem
16 Jun 2004, 9:41 PM
You write about each one as if tey were the only one. Kinda makes ya wonder. WHAZZUP?
on some deleted poem
16 Jun 2004, 9:42 PM
Yes, but sometimes they go bad much sooner.
on The Freemasons by Bachus
16 Jun 2004, 7:22 PM
Do you think that tho Pope hired the free masons to build cathedrals because of the designs? The free mason's don't have a lock on good architecture. And yes, the early bird does get the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese. You know man, you may think you know, because you have all these <books>. But there is nothing about the free masons, the Knights of Templar, Cylomancy, or anything else of that nature written in a place where someone like you will be able to just go have a look see. Good bit of meandering thought tho'.
on for sharon by shazpen
16 Jun 2004, 7:29 PM
Looking for the soul? She will never be the same. We can try to live with who she is now. Or...