on some deleted poem
26 Apr 2003, 7:35 PM
nice one, this really sounds like a real garage band or maybe more, keep writing cause u might have something
on some deleted poem
27 Oct 2002, 2:44 PM
this reminds me of something in my life so sad, oh yeah my life
on some deleted poem
12 May 2003, 10:34 AM
Find better rhymes, stop using "I", make it a little longer because there is no chorus I don't know what else cause the song sounds like you have experience being a reject (just playing)
on some deleted poem
12 May 2003, 5:37 PM
Nice, I can find a nice tune for this, probably one of your best.
on some deleted poem
9 May 2003, 5:35 PM
I feel you could extend this song a little because each verse is a little too long, but overall, it's a good song (9)
on some deleted poem
8 May 2003, 6:05 PM
What happened to my remix????? oh well, I'll post it myself
on some deleted poem
2 May 2003, 6:47 PM
It's ok, but I do want you to use more than just roller coaster over and over again, other than that, it's ok
on Midnight Dream by Katie
12 Oct 2002, 10:54 AM
this is just sooo funny. It's like it actually happened (hoping it didn't) lol, but great work
on some deleted poem
2 Oct 2002, 8:29 AM
THis is a great lyric, it shows about the true imagineation of a lyricist
on some deleted poem
2 Oct 2002, 8:32 AM
you just need a better ryhme scehme but overall one of your better ones
on Roll the dice (revised) by Katie
15 Dec 2002, 5:40 PM
just glad to help