on some deleted poem
11 May 2002, 7:24 PM
Situational haiku is a real haiku. It speaks from the heart. I feel your rage.
on Quandries of a Summer-night's Green by Modulo
21 Aug 2002, 10:50 PM
You don't know WHAT's good far ya!
on unsalvaged by skaskowski
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
WOW! That was a very moving piece for me. Many emotions came through and your imagery and internal connections flow so smoothly that my mind never left your thoughts. A very great work!
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
ouch. I'm afraid that the final words were more gruesome than any visual could become.
on the coldest hell by skaskowski
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
This made me feel a very particular emotion, but I wasn't very happy with the end wording. Very blatant after a very subtle rise and fall.
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
I really like the 'streamers' throughout the poem; themes that carry throughout but only a tonue-in-cheek kind of way. Nothing to blatant! Subtle makes me happy.
on Colloid by skaskowski
16 Mar 2002, 1:21 AM
I like it, because it's true.
on some deleted poem
21 Apr 2004, 5:52 PM
So... what are your rules for haiku?
on some deleted poem
21 Apr 2004, 5:53 PM
Is this haiku? I have no idea anymore. 'Haiku' is just a word.
on Secret Identities Revealed by thepinkbunnyofdoom
22 Apr 2004, 4:21 PM
Cute
on All hail Discordia?(a true haiku story) by razorgrin
28 Apr 2004, 10:36 AM
I loved that trilogoy! Rock and roll.