on A christmas thought by keatsImnot
18 Dec 2002, 6:36 AM
I like the tempo and the mood; the insertion of provocative insight is nice, also.-8
on some deleted poem
30 Dec 2002, 12:55 PM
Awesome!
on some deleted poem
30 Dec 2002, 12:49 PM
I agree with ranger, this is quite good; Somber, thoughtful, and beautiful.
on Bumming kiddies by Bobjim
30 Dec 2002, 12:50 PM
whoever you are you're horrible and full af hate and bitterness.
Go kill yourself.
Go kill yourself.
on some deleted poem
30 Dec 2002, 12:52 PM
Good stuff.
on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2002, 1:20 PM
Well, I for one like it. It already has a lot of meaning, at least, I perceive meaning and theme where it may or may not exist. I am a great lover of disillusion and modern day angst. Irony and subtly sarcastic wit, though are only, it seems to me, for the somewhat tuned in and globally empathic.
on some deleted poem
18 Dec 2002, 6:33 AM
It seems to be missing just a little something in the middle, but, I like it; I think it's tone of pointed obscurity is interesting.
on some deleted poem
18 Dec 2002, 6:49 AM
I think it's a mistake to consider rhyme so important in the body of a poem to tell a story; when rhyme is forced it's phony and strained. Spontanaety(?)is an important element to producing vivid emotional poetic scenes.
on lackluster fear by blackball
18 Dec 2002, 7:01 AM
Interesting; obscure meaning is nice.
on some deleted poem
18 Dec 2002, 7:04 AM
?obtrusion of my center? Fill me in, I can't get it through context.
on some deleted poem
18 Dec 2002, 7:06 AM
I like this. It's similar to my own feelings sometimes.
on pledging allegiance by moonUnit
18 Dec 2002, 7:08 AM
Damn right, sister!!-9
on wax by New Life Drug
18 Dec 2002, 7:13 AM
Well despite what others think, I like it, it's fun.
Don't believe it; there's always time to go beyond the past failures and neglect. One can become the 'Chief' again; I know I'm headed there myself, I can feel it in my angry tears, in my sighs of past frustration. The clouds show teeth, razors of new horizons, bold interpretations of what's to come, what will be, by my hand, through angry resolve-9
on Goes the Spoils by <~>
16 Dec 2002, 9:36 AM
Interesting. I can see my own friends at far away, far awhen bars,from the time before when I still longed for raucous nights of confusion and soulful empathy.-8
on some deleted poem
18 Dec 2002, 8:06 AM
That Malcolm, kat's, got groove.-9
on Writers Resume' by wordsy
18 Dec 2002, 7:50 AM
Nice tempo. good poem...I think.
on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 9:21 AM
huh, or should I say 'duh'
on HGH 1000 (human growth hormone) fountain of youth? by Bachus
16 Dec 2002, 9:29 AM
Very funny. I love 'smart-ass humor.' -8