on lurcher for lunch - for James Kelman by roy rocket
6 Jul 2002, 7:16 AM
Fuck!:)
on The Forest Child by forestchild7
10 Jul 2002, 12:08 PM
Nice.Nothing wrong with optimism.
on And they both knew by Morvium
10 Jul 2002, 12:23 PM
It's sad...I've seen people in relationships like that too.
on some deleted poem
10 Jul 2002, 1:37 PM
monkeys are good.
on i will bare it: by Sapphire
10 Jul 2002, 1:39 PM
good, but the rhythm needs work.
on some deleted poem
10 Jul 2002, 1:41 PM
Sappy. Learn spelling and punctuation.
on IV (Deuteronomy's Lament) by coalcracker
10 Jul 2002, 1:42 PM
what the hell is that?
on Sleep Well by jriemerm
10 Jul 2002, 1:53 PM
great imagery!
on some deleted poem
10 Jul 2002, 11:51 AM
Modern pop.Very profound.Hear that thump?It's your hollywood crackwhore dying.That thump you heard years ago was the originality of your theme doing the same.
on Birth in the Valley of Liquor by horus8
10 Jul 2002, 11:54 AM
Can't wait till California sinks.
on some deleted poem
10 Jul 2002, 12:05 PM
Focus on something.Francesca Lia Block called. She wants royalties.
on wizard master by beakism
6 Jul 2002, 8:17 AM
I, Kaerith, priestess of Rastbaxis, salute you.
on some deleted poem
22 Jun 2002, 6:20 AM
mmm...colourful..
on some deleted poem
22 Jun 2002, 6:31 AM
Great rhythm.
on some deleted poem
3 Jul 2002, 1:50 PM
fan-bloody-tastic!
on some deleted poem
21 Jun 2002, 11:21 AM
moving.
on some deleted poem
25 Jun 2002, 7:55 AM
Your rhyme schemes are a little..young, but I'd give you a hug anyway.
on some deleted poem
25 Jun 2002, 7:59 AM
the phrasing of the pieces could possibly use some work.I'm not repeatedly bitching, I just accidentally clicked submit before I was done. It would be interesting to know you personally at the time you wrote these.
on some deleted poem
6 Jul 2002, 12:25 PM
fun.
on Skin Deep Sun by Morvium
8 Jul 2002, 2:01 PM
I like it.