on some deleted poem
31 Dec 2002, 12:10 PM
I like it; 'his atonement' is nice.
on some deleted poem
23 Dec 2002, 8:59 AM
Very nice.
on The Eternal Center by Quarton
31 Dec 2002, 12:14 PM
The ending is a bit abrupt, I'm guilty of that kinda' thing myself. I like it, it's very thought inspiring, and very near profound, and it flows well. A nice use of words.
on The Eskimo and the fish by INTRANSIT
31 Dec 2002, 12:43 PM
I really like the first stanza, very witty use of words. I'm probably not qualified to comment to much on the direction of the meaning or the choices you've made, but I enjoyed it, though somehow it seems to be missing something.
on The Eskimo and the fish by INTRANSIT
31 Dec 2002, 12:45 PM
actually now that I look at it again, it's the second stanza, not the first, which I like so much,... the first is good, too, though. I'm such a 'wuss'.
on some deleted poem
31 Dec 2002, 12:48 PM
Hmmm.
on missing time by Bill Z Bub
22 Dec 2002, 10:57 AM
Awesome!
on some deleted poem
22 Dec 2002, 11:08 AM
"Damnitalltohell," The world has no business being alright when my life is fucked up. I agree! Destroy the moon, goddamnit, destroy the world, despite midnight's plans unfurled, despite the plans for divine grace, in this at least I'll save face.-9
on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub
22 Dec 2002, 11:10 AM
Nice.