on The Path of Least Resistance by eliastemplar
22 May 2004, 8:34 PM
sounds good to me
on Something's gone wrong by zodiac
25 Jul 2004, 3:10 PM
are you asthmatic too?
on some deleted poem
28 Feb 2004, 8:34 PM
this is where i would dwell... until your tears,
a million salty spheres,
rain cold upon the ground.
a million salty spheres,
rain cold upon the ground.
on beef flavored ramen by ThePariahDog
28 Feb 2004, 7:57 PM
ramen, a true staple i can warm to from my college days, instant satisfaction in neutral browns with little celebrations of veggies in bright re-hydrated hues.
on without you by ThePariahDog
28 Feb 2004, 8:00 PM
dont tether yourself to rhyming... let go...
on godhead by ThePariahDog
28 Feb 2004, 8:01 PM
there you go... gettin down and gritty
on real folk blues by ThePariahDog
28 Feb 2004, 8:02 PM
i still see some clay here...
on advice by ThePariahDog
28 Feb 2004, 8:05 PM
first utterings... tuff stuff... i know where this comes from, so i know where you can definitely take this wisdom you are scratching at.
on some deleted poem
28 Feb 2004, 8:32 PM
correct and keen. i just would like to vibrate more... but this is the first i see of yours.
on Nature Of The Day by impert&ent
29 Feb 2004, 4:50 PM
brilliantly pieced together from bits of sound, thought, pictures, words and whole lives given in one instance over the phone, over a misunderstanding which begain in a safeway and ended with the presence of angels.
on 11th September (a senyru) by scitz
19 Oct 2006, 4:11 AM
9/11 was an inside job.
connect all the mind boggling dots at:
www.loosechange911.com/index_main.html
wake up america
connect all the mind boggling dots at:
www.loosechange911.com/index_main.html
wake up america
on Deconstruction Of The Heart by impert&ent
16 Jun 2005, 7:05 PM
you are a deconstructionist, in a twist of taking down all that has fallen apart.
on fire has its own logic by impert&ent
16 Jun 2005, 8:20 PM
i like reading your mind
on These are not just words by impert&ent
16 Jun 2005, 8:23 PM
Words are not meant to persuade
But to convey... perfect synthesis.
But to convey... perfect synthesis.
on Wholes: the year in reflection by impert&ent
16 Jun 2005, 8:25 PM
and i miss reading your heart
on the space between by impert&ent
16 Jun 2005, 8:27 PM
there should be an inhalation at the end of these lines.
on Fourteen Years by impert&ent
16 Jun 2005, 8:29 PM
as in bowls me over bowls
on 311006 txt to russia by daniella
20 May 2007, 8:22 PM
i would edit it, but then lose all ur comments... so it stays as is. but thanx for the feedback!
on broken bottles by richa
20 May 2007, 8:33 PM
it's a barren landscape.
i love: brimming with storm but no rejoicing. it makes no sense, but sings.
i love: brimming with storm but no rejoicing. it makes no sense, but sings.
on Grab Out For J. Christ! by Sing4Jesus!
20 May 2007, 9:19 PM
There are some misconceptions here, that make the zealous hodge podge verses sting even more.
God did not make our lives to be worthless.
His enemies may have killed Jesus, but according to the New Testament, this was part of God's plan... How else could he have fulfilled the passion?
And lastly, because I want to go to sleep, you actually think we could actually hurt the greatest grandest architect...You think it matters if we believe or not??
Only to our own faith... God exists regardless of us, and He or She or whatever our creator is, does not need our votes.
God did not make our lives to be worthless.
His enemies may have killed Jesus, but according to the New Testament, this was part of God's plan... How else could he have fulfilled the passion?
And lastly, because I want to go to sleep, you actually think we could actually hurt the greatest grandest architect...You think it matters if we believe or not??
Only to our own faith... God exists regardless of us, and He or She or whatever our creator is, does not need our votes.