on some deleted poem
5 Mar 2004, 2:39 AM
It was good until you used the word "fuck"...
on dear jim d. by peaceseeker
14 Mar 2004, 8:47 AM
Too many quotation marks, me head hurts
on My Stigmata: "Psychotica" by SupremeDreamer
14 Mar 2004, 8:55 AM
i think i need to study this more, there's alot there
on what i see with strings by New Life Drug
14 Mar 2004, 9:01 AM
It feels more like a run-on sentence than a poem, the images are too random=..some connect and some I just don't know...
on The Seagull Reader by SpiffyDoo
16 Mar 2004, 12:36 AM
I like it but it doesn't read like a poem, at least until the last stanza, it reads more like a paragraph -- maybe that was your point - i still thought it was good
on Brethren, oblivion is not the road to the city Ataraxis II by SupremeDreamer
7 Mar 2006, 5:42 AM
Sounds like your preaching to me, I hate lectures.
And I don't fancy looking up every other word you write in the dictionary, I'm a simple man and big word don't impress me.
And I don't fancy looking up every other word you write in the dictionary, I'm a simple man and big word don't impress me.
on Bobjim, Jimbob by Spider-Man
9 Aug 2006, 12:45 AM
I usually like disgusting humorous shit , but this one made me a little sick to my stomach, maybe that's the point.