on some deleted poem
4 Oct 2003, 9:04 PM
Good morning.
on some deleted poem
2 Oct 2003, 8:12 AM
A splendid poem, but the line breaks and lower case crap simply doesn't work here.
on Battered moon by revy13
2 Oct 2003, 10:49 AM
hmmm. how does one actually figure out whether or not the moon has been battered? Doust it cry. Doust it shimmy? Perhaps... it sends you an e-mail saying "help me I'm a battered in the pants of some highschooler on a bus staring at you right now with a brown eye!"?. That's it battered moons don't have black I's they have brown I's. lol. between me and you? your title is fucking seriously pathetic on a huge scale. An avalanche, if you will, of retardation. Kitsch to the max!
on Fuck your fucking face monkey fucker by Bachus
2 Oct 2003, 2:04 PM
My favourite part is when you say Collages. urp.
on clandestine momentum by skaskowski
2 Oct 2003, 5:16 PM
In what country is this a Sonnet in?
on some deleted poem
2 Oct 2003, 6:57 PM
Voom voom.
on A Distracting Fistful of Haiku by HaikuMofo
4 Oct 2003, 9:30 PM
"West of Switzerland" would work better
1,2,6,and7 are the shiz.
1,2,6,and7 are the shiz.
on Hard To Tell by New Life Drug
4 Oct 2003, 9:32 PM
From that perspective? I bet.
on Painted Air by New Life Drug
4 Oct 2003, 9:33 PM
Improves dramatically towards the end, but starts beached whale. 7.
on such a horrible thing to waste by Freethinker1602
6 Oct 2003, 1:31 AM
Interesting.
on some deleted poem
6 Oct 2003, 1:40 AM
Ha ha ha, Okey dokey, that was some silly shit there. Like the time my left foot exploded and seriously wounded a clown red nose.
on some deleted poem
6 Oct 2003, 1:49 AM
Could use another edit, but who couldn't? I'm just saying that because your work is worth it, and always either perfect or damn near. 9.
on some deleted poem
6 Oct 2003, 3:43 AM
Oh yeah, dig it. 10.
on some deleted poem
7 Oct 2003, 4:40 PM
Siberian Gulag, obviously.
on some deleted poem
7 Oct 2003, 4:45 PM
neato.
on Orchidess by abecedarian
7 Oct 2003, 6:06 PM
There's a great poem in there somewhere That's for sure.
on some deleted poem
8 Oct 2003, 2:42 PM
Posibly the best thing I've read in a week
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TODAY! JOE-JOE HAS WON THE ESTEAMED AND MOST ADMONISHABLE GOLDEN QUE-TIP AWARDE.
CONGRATULATIONS FEW HAVE DARED TRY. FEW HAVE RECIEVED. CLEAN YOUR EARS WELL JOE-JOE, CLEAN YOUR EARS WELL MY SWEET LITTLE MAN.
on Joe-Joe's Retard Trinity Remix (There can be only one) by Y2kSlamPoet
8 Oct 2003, 2:48 PM
SHIT!!!!!!!!
This win's the first ever HORUSIAN PARODY AWARD! or the HPA (hispictos pubiescent accrusion) The first ever! That was fucking hilarious. I'm serious I was just smoking a joint and reading this and fucking rocking back and forth with a cackle cracking garulous verve emmiting from-a hole in my face. 10!
This win's the first ever HORUSIAN PARODY AWARD! or the HPA (hispictos pubiescent accrusion) The first ever! That was fucking hilarious. I'm serious I was just smoking a joint and reading this and fucking rocking back and forth with a cackle cracking garulous verve emmiting from-a hole in my face. 10!