Comments byhorus8, 861–880 back. Include replies

on Bearings by emilyowey 3 Aug 2003, 1:56 PM
What the hell is that going to do? What are you going to take the vapor and make a fucking sandwich? Good grief.
on some deleted poem 3 Aug 2003, 1:55 PM
I think you need a different word than disheveled.
on Lethal Weapon by poetandkonwit 2 Aug 2003, 11:50 AM
And to think... I thought you were talentless?
on Almost forgotten by Agemo-Z 2 Aug 2003, 12:11 PM

pooky
on some deleted poem 1 Aug 2003, 4:06 PM
5-7-6. Lovely none the less.

Mart/yre/d.
on some deleted poem 3 Aug 2003, 1:53 PM
"I not ready to hear what you might tell." It would be nice if you made this sentence legible Dan, add an "am". Also, from the beginning I knew you were the old man straight through. Not to spoil your surprise, of course, just a fact. Perhaps it's the SS check?
on some deleted poem 2 Aug 2003, 1:00 PM
Righto! go check out horus8 at garageband.com to read the reviews on our songs mate. I have to go to a wedding, see you later.
on A Dreamers Cookery: Cosmic Gardener [edited] by SupremeDreamer 2 Aug 2003, 12:08 PM
Sir, your new glasses obviously have confused a raisen for your divinity complex-ion.
on The Path of Least Resistance by eliastemplar 1 Aug 2003, 4:07 PM
Well that's a happening piece.
on Bed by swift_enterprises 1 Aug 2003, 1:13 PM
Nothing ground breaking here, but that's pleasant occasionally, normality in simple observations and respect for the natural world around you. 7
on Everyone thinks I'm Settle by King Abdullah II 1 Aug 2003, 1:41 PM
Now that's devotion. 10
on My Last Plea by Inconceivable_Dreams 1 Aug 2003, 2:09 AM
Childish and honest, brave. 8
on some deleted poem 1 Aug 2003, 1:40 PM
I expected this one too have comprimised is anal retentiveness, but sadly I was let down. Therefore I must dock you a point and merely give you a nine. I enjoyed these very much, may I use them for propaganda leaflets?
on some deleted poem 1 Aug 2003, 1:47 PM
Ha Ha ha ha, a treasure, ha ha. What a hip toss. That was like Kerry Voneric and the iron claw, what a riot.
on Migratory Reptile by eliastemplar 1 Aug 2003, 1:45 PM
The end could be strengthened and overall I had fun with this piece. 7.
on Clay Man by eliastemplar 1 Aug 2003, 4:35 PM
flouroscope
on some deleted poem 1 Aug 2003, 4:37 PM
Heeky
on some deleted poem 1 Aug 2003, 1:36 PM
That's swit.
on marlon by bearhead 2 Aug 2003, 11:56 AM
Wow, what metaphors.
on some deleted poem 3 Aug 2003, 1:48 PM
Certainly