Re: A Tender Kiss by Jody Conn	19-Aug-02/8:53 PM
more pointless lesbian trivia...wow! you're so brave to be outright gay and proud. unite.unite carprt munchers unite..we've been repressed by phallic symbols and the "man" for too long, lets worship the stink of true love and vaginad tongu flicks...leonard cohen would break his guitar over your head in spanishy bound exctasy.g
Re: sweet dreams by wolfgang	19-Aug-02/8:48 PM
how in the fuck do you illuminate a candle? with a spotlight, and your use of the past tense in the present would make a real german like mozart, chew his way through bone dirt and wood to find you, to chew!
Re: Black Buns by Bachus	19-Aug-02/12:16 AM
larry rivers...my friend is dead and i was psychicly attacked last night, make a point you spic, or don't talk to me about pointless shit..if you wanna finally talk art, music,or movies and literature let me know..if you wanna play games, pull out scrabble and make a poem ' de atitude'. or what what's your fucking point p&k? do you have a kid? would you like to be catagorized by some uncommunicative light weight who claims to walk the earth...larry fucking rivers walked the earth with kerouac, and ginsberg, he was a wonderful poet, artist-proto-pop modern art sly devil fox. who tongue and cheeked the world wiyh his magnificent observations. heres a quote just for you, you gifted well read slam poety from kansas...."cubism didn't find me, iblew a joint with some friends in a gutter, and thought picasso...yeah.i can do that.why not i'm just a kid from the bronx, who hung out with beat' jews who were from harlem before harlem was black...he played the sax, in the 13th st. band, and one time, one time jackson pollock even tried to run over one of his sculptors at a mutual friends housee
Re: Summertime by KatieKaBoom	18-Aug-02/5:03 AM
or never cum at all...i came...
Re: The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum	18-Aug-02/2:03 AM
you are a cheeky devil..i like that seven oclock bit..way to through off the blood hounds..you're a crafty mick that's for certain, i think it was rather 5 hours earlier than seven..then again i am a paranoid insomniac.maskless and subject now to natural erosion. damn. good nite
Re: Yes Sir by wolfgang	18-Aug-02/1:57 AM
good, i hope so...shell tricks are notoriously fast and arousing!
Re: Time by NeeMan	18-Aug-02/1:55 AM
"nice poem"maintains it's own presence well. well..well enough..7/10
Re: love your mother: by Sapphire	18-Aug-02/1:53 AM
i wonder who's retarded evil twin this is...da..oh..ah..nevermind
Re: Chain Reaction by Voth269	18-Aug-02/1:51 AM
you must have minored in creative writing and meteorology, cuz that's exactly as it happens. i've graphed it complete with a detailed outline that accompanies.
Re: The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum	17-Aug-02/10:55 PM
the spooning, or the pharmocueds and porn..well..we could learn something from one anothers nude bent to comfort sentiments as far as the spooning goes, and the other answer would be cuz the re(pub)licans are in office, and we know how they feel about abortions and petty drug arrests, not to (overall point is sexy porn stars are afraid to knock boots and get loaded due to late night abuse by undersexed fossil fuel lobbyists. shit! none of that made a bit of sense did it..okay i'll settle for 'why not'?...speaking of settle..wonder where he's been hiding lately?
Re: The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum	17-Aug-02/10:39 PM
i thought we had shorned our cowlicks, and moved on, but i see you are bristling with pit viper spit this evening..and after i voted on your skid marks and everything..you sir, are incorrigable, and reeking of stout and spuds..i would love to strum a bit more for you, but my electric mandolin has been pawned to cover my porn and drug expenses. aspirin, and red haired harlots are grwing more and more expensive as the moon wanes..we can only pray for a good waxing soon..care to spoon for my last canadian loon?
Re: setting the record straight on April by poetandknowit	17-Aug-02/10:29 PM
yeah z... i feel a bit better..lot's of driving though, but the over abundance of introspective bikini patters did seem to eventually balance out the grueling race there.. if you call getting washing machined by 6-10 foot shorebreakers at the wedge (famous ca beach south of balboa that has a jetti which pushes the swells to double their size, aka el playa that breaks necks, and sandblasts your arse crack) purged. as far as the bottle goes...ah..tonight it's a crisp chianti with a bit of broiled sea bass on top of rice pilaff. i might jerk off to buffalo 66 for an encore...or maybe glue more junk drawer items to my breakfast nook table(due to frequent mushroom ingestions this summer my day room table and benches have become some of my more artistically inclined friends, and i's pet project. it's all for the love of mother, but where could she be? island hopping with the columbian drug cartel and designing panties i bet, yes, i'd wager p&k's one fingered farm on that. she is a malignant breeder that one, the more she kicks me, the more i bow to her swollen femininity
Re: The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum	17-Aug-02/10:10 PM
it's like blind date meets jackass. jackass. it's funnier then two horse flys fucking on a mercedes hood ornament doing 90 on the freeway(oh i forgot, you're from the lands of fairy mounds, a freeway is a paved multi lane express way that cars use to get from point a to b quicker unless you're in new york or l.a then it becomes a parking lot full of every asshole the imagination can contrive, looking around, at everyone else looking around) may i also tread urine in your bladders puddle. the ocean was a bit cold today, i could use a good golden shower soaking. thanx.
Re: setting the record straight on April by poetandknowit	17-Aug-02/9:58 PM
Danny devito? Why not ..say..magnum p.i. we have three months listed, fuck it ! throw the other nine in for good measure..and really be a rebel. your hurting the feelings of sagittariuses everywhere. selfish recluse. Brown recluse. bastard! lover...
Re: Tijuana jail song by horus8	17-Aug-02/1:51 PM
i want to dedicate this to my friend p&k, and our beatiful mexican romance that we shared last year...you are always in my thoughts...are love is forever...la rossa! tu bonito pequito pendejo!
Re: The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog	17-Aug-02/1:42 PM
yeah nice one tarqui, way to be descriptive, and darwinianly deep.even the most troubled sinner has time to offer an asian pear to your shrine of poetry...i don't even think you need the () cuz it's really just descriptive and deep and telling and not shallow and wow..did i say descriptive?..yeah...wow..really moving shit here...pardon me while i take notes..
Re: When the wheels stop turning. by The troubled sinner	17-Aug-02/1:34 PM
otterific!i
Re: Selective Alopecia by Ming T. Merciless	17-Aug-02/1:31 PM
yes.yes.no.yes.maybe. how dare you. thank you. right back at you. could you pass me the meatloaf. hey, there's always next year.taos poetry circus, you bet i subscribe! national library of poets want to give you a plaque and turn your poetry into music, that's great! good luck. thinking of you stretched out at balboa beach. wondering if your running through the beans beat boxing away.do they give you guys different colored belts to show rank and experience. one day soon i hope you'll take me in as your new acolyte, and show me the weirding way.do you think when i get back home today...we can maybe..hang out you know i can follow you around the site while you follow and kiss z's and d.a's arses with your cute little eskimo squint. you are my muse. but must you drink out of the bottle. when we have a whole cupboard full of glasses. your's truly 'mother'. oh if you got 2 or 3 minutes later maybe we can name some famous jay hawks, "together". thanks. thinking of you.your supplimentally discharged penis, horus8
Re: Selective Alopecia by Ming T. Merciless	17-Aug-02/11:43 AM
yes..meditate on your poetic angle....everyone listen up! pb otter will now define the difference between spoken word poetry and what he does,because we all know that when we are in that "poetic" moment of flow we don't speak the words out loud in our minds to see how they sound...no..never.. and choosing to pen it down instead of recording yourself speaking the words is also extremely different....and correct me if i'm wrong, but don't slam poets verbalize and perform their work on stage (improv-ing, ranting, living the work) for those interested, no...we would much rather see 87 year old mrs. jenkings up in front of a mic reading, monotoned, and at half speed her favorite cat poems from her spiral notebook...my dear topeka tater tot, the medium in which one chooses to create their work with is neither here nor there, the end result is the same. poetry..whether it's written in blood,ink, rocks (stonehedge, architecture is a form of poetry) shit, with soap on a mirror, with microphone, or instrument, paint, or posture...dying by living...now i despised aristotle, but in his book poetics, he makes a good point in dealing with just what exactly poetry is...."poetry is a mixture of words and messages that can be understood by the author and audience(reader) on many interchangable levels, holding diverse and subdivided symbolic understandings and it at all times should reach a universal and personal climax for all involved". (which is why poetry gives those who read it the feeling that it was crafted especially for them) a mime is a poet, a doctor is a poet, even you sir are a poet, but a poet is not just a poet he or she is an expressor of word pictures for the purpose of experimental communication to convey a vastly more profound message. the only reason you're aware of objects and activities around you at all times is because you have a name for each and everyone of them, god spoke life into the body of adam. if you don't have a name for something it escapes your senses and is essentialy undetectable, poltergeists, ghosts, big foot and ufo's(unidentified flying object) unnamable flying object, duck! it's a dovishian jerty foron. wow. that was close. i have to surf now. bye..
Re: i dreamt i spoke by roses are read	17-Aug-02/10:50 AM
i dreamt i spoke syphallus rash. are you staring at my head gear?