Re: Cut by TheVampireLeStan	23-Aug-02/10:58 PM
dead..because i read...FUCK MY eyes....oh jesu..the cad has penised my eyes...drink urine from now on to properly operate your writing vehicle...JESUS FUCKING christ...replace every "cut" with "nun"...to better this skin rash...FUCK HAAAAAAAA!
Re: A prom that could never be by Eric Johnson	23-Aug-02/10:53 PM
you sir..need an overdose of swollen shaft...your chivalry is charasmatically uncomitted. i pray you knoch her up, and work in a factory until you lose your mind, then.....we can only hope have shakeb this preposterious pointless material...train wreck.2/10
Re: Sacrosanct Oligarch by Frass	23-Aug-02/10:48 PM
the title is perfect and then you started doing that crazy thing you do with your brain...thinking..think less, thinking has nothing to do with writing. it just gets in the way and complicates the simple(yime up while i squezze this pimple.there)..this poem looks like a steak cooking a cow..6/10
Re: Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	23-Aug-02/3:21 PM
this is a glossary so fucking layered...unreal..it's the backstory of gilgamesh and a gay harry crumb...i drank upon my prawne all night, and indeede enbrowned my limp wrist and vomited through reddening fingers like a rainbird sprinkler...i fuckin love this and da...i want to rape his prawne and keelhaul myself gay blade drawn...the whole thing is just too fucking good...io have no more worde' to be so stiff' and create a new'''way of crushtations and nuding fuck...i personally i'm speechless and errot flynned right in the chamber of frocked cauliflower poop shooters ahoy...arhh 10/10/10/10!
Re: {Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8	23-Aug-02/2:58 PM
leos and scorpios get along actually very well and the sex is beyond measure usually on the scorpios part and inclination, but the relation ship can suffer greatly intellectually and in substance (layers) not always though, sometimes depending on retrogrades and environment that previously mentioned can get reversed....but mostly its the either...they're also both known to give each other space quite well and often, then at times explode in character to see one another at all costs regardless of who or what is in the way <sponsored by 'telepathy' the only way to communicate and 'mahdi' a fourteen year old messiah who controlled mecca for 200 days twenty years ago, he had blue eyes and was A HALF ARAB WESTERN BLOOD HYBRID!> i love that previos 20 button by the may kaolin fire rocks!!!!
Re: love song by <~>	22-Aug-02/9:06 PM
by the way i was wrong it was his 27th symphony in G, and you're probably a gemini...that dark angel story is fucking priceless huh...he's a she's a something ori-gi-nal...so sayith the priest!
Re: {Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8	22-Aug-02/9:01 PM
why are you a aquarius? i would of wagered....aries or sagitarius, or taurus or a scorpio, perchance virgo, but not an aquarius? right?!
Re: {Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8	22-Aug-02/7:11 PM
i don't know mrs. god? they make me feel so dirty and rushed..i have to scrub now...my shaft has been barnacled, and i,ve also sprung a leak...o
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	22-Aug-02/2:25 PM
da. i'm leaving a vote and comment on this tarts fertile land for you referring to your latest epic sir choadk and such here it is, for some reason i couldn't leave it at the story, and it gobbled up my first brilliant comment, but i gave it a 10/10..it was delicious i wrote a brilliant comment for this da but the site red lined it..fuck...this is a work of staggering genius...i laughed for a fucking hour..sheer mastery..stupid enbrowned prawn operated (should keel haul a prawn for nudity in the next one) redlined computer errors any way you win the HORUS8 SHORT STORY OF ERROT FLYNNISM and chamber music madness...i had more fun reading this than anything in two months...you sir are dastardly and without limits! 10/10!s
Re: Bad habits & tramps by horus8	22-Aug-02/1:13 PM
i have been feeling just a bit driven..i gotta go read d.a's new cataract....i heard its baconish, or should i say beakish (beakinism the study of mr. bacon...thanks z..i'll chat when i'm done reading...i need a littla d.a in the morning...or should i say late..late..morning.what? i'm a writer not a morning person.....drone.gone.hone.scone.trumpet death ray!!!.
Re: Crimson Diaries by Jsylum	22-Aug-02/2:12 AM
i haven't had one since prom night.....
Re: Ring Toss by Shin-Bojangles	22-Aug-02/2:10 AM
i hope a clan of hobgoblins sets up shop in your arse!...you hobbit loving soccer junkies!
Re: would i be considered crazy by silvertongueddevil	22-Aug-02/2:02 AM
some guys have all the luck....we can only hope he's not a diabetic, or sickle cell anemic...8/10
Re: Waltz by unknown	22-Aug-02/12:33 AM
even my herpes are wretching frightened running away from that mouth and that danct...to vague...lacking that wich makes vague compact poetry acute...you sir should obelisk squat immediately..
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	21-Aug-02/3:16 PM
geez people...it's the orc who died not our ability to be heavy handed wit spilling creationalists! can't we all just get a thong...then dance for monopoly money and beernuts...love thy neighbors...man, woman, dwarf, orc, black, white,fat, slight,philopino, and or dog eating ass wipes...hug eachother...smile more...what the hell lets twelve step ourselves back to that happy place in our minds...then...ATTACK! ATTACK! DIE TALENTLESS CADS! YOU ARE ALL UNWORTHY....bow to the toe nailed vulva...yes bow to the cat gut sewn polish rectum....bobby pin the scrotum...then tell me again how much you love me....there..i feel better!..how about you all?
Re: Date Rape Gang Bang by Bachus	20-Aug-02/8:26 PM
just don't vote high on bachus, he likes to suck, and don't vote on blackbuns you'll knock him off the worst list, and it's currently the highlight of his wretched life wink, wink give the bastard zero's except on the legitamatly good pieces like mobile homes and you gott a read geishasblah blah and the ultimate creep-goes to mecca his new brain melt down it's got hedwig and everythingg
Re: Secret, Admirer by <~>	20-Aug-02/3:49 PM
yes mojo, i totally agree with you on this one(i justy couldn't put my finger quite on it yet).z..i was waiting to ride the coat tails of someone elses comment into this evaluating this work of yours, cuz i couldn't figure out why i didn't quite get it, i mean it's cool to send the small minded to the dictionary over and over again, but you had me sprawling with your choice of huge cryptic words, and i know that razor grin is a very educated and well read young lady, and she uses the same sort of itinerary (she liked your use og fecund) in her methods of explaining her own writings (i love both of your guys stuff passionately honestly i do), but it is almost overwrought with power words and phrases and structured shape, it moves like an undiscovered deep sea creature, and that can be both good and bad...i'm waiting to vote on it until i piece it all together in a way that works for my need to see where it's been and where it's going, don't get me wrong, i'm still waiting to vote on it until i feel comfortable with it...you are a hell of a writer, and i have alot of respect for your poetry, cuz it demands it. few do..i will read it until i feel it..and then i'll vote..god bless the fecundity of restless desires in us all..s
Re: A Tender Kiss by Jody Conn	19-Aug-02/9:24 PM
hey z ...let me guess? you were eating huh...hope it is was good.. we all deserve a great meal after the trials of the remedial day...i'd love to cook for you and introduce you to my family and friends if you're ever in my neck of the woods, just say so, i'll put you up for a few nights...and show some of the better aspects of la. glad you got home safe...your friend h....o
Re: Heavenly HOst! by gay	19-Aug-02/9:09 PM
what a fucking waste of web space. dark angel, granted is a pretty creative writer, but lets have a little self fuckibg respect "for the love of god, your groveling impudence has forced me to de-cork yet another bottle of merlot....this is trite hog wash to put it mildly, to put it harshly, this is pan's clefted hoof squashing his own piled shit in a moment of fairy fucking debauchery...it stinks man pure and simple...neither amusing or serious, somewhere in between shitsville, wyoming, and sawdust, delaware...you are a chinese snakefish that can'y even speak chineses
Re: A Tender Kiss by Jody Conn	19-Aug-02/8:54 PM
more pointless lesbian trivia...wow! you're so brave to be outright gay and proud. unite.unite carprt munchers unite..we've been repressed by phallic symbols and the "man" for too long, lets worship the stink of true love and vaginad tongu flicks...leonard cohen would break his guitar over your head in spanishy bound exctasy.g