on looking for him by Freethinker1602
21 Jul 2003, 11:56 AM
Perhaps you should rent a cherry picker and join him?
on Yellow Star by Mr Pig
21 Jul 2003, 11:52 AM
The difference between Jews and American Indians is the tribes don't fucking whine on a daily basis, and they are still piss broke and suffering. While the Jews are once again on the top, in control of everything, as always still fucking pretending like they got it bad. Perhaps you should do a piece on the Pygmies plight called "White dwarf".
on I am the gayest by walrus8
21 Jul 2003, 11:47 AM
Certainly
on Seduce Like Zeus by EAger to Offend
21 Jul 2003, 11:46 AM
I believe He would of stayed with the Euro.
replying on Let's Not Forget by Artemis745
20 Jul 2003, 11:33 PM
Are you nuts? Don't feed strays!
on When Tomorrow Starts Without Me by Artemis745
20 Jul 2003, 11:31 PM
I love seeing people gamble all of their chips on eternity with god in heaven without a plan b...
It's just damn brave, damn brave thinking. I especially loved the stories of how heaven was made of precious metals with a lamb for every lap. Yes, Jesus is good to us. I hope he has a castle on the clouds and everyone just eats all day and never gets fat ot old and all ancestors back to Abraham and Adam are there to share JOY! Yeah, heaven, wow, I just can't fucking wait *bang* (Another teenage suicide brought to you by Ballmark, a better greeting card because it's been marked by hairy greasy nuts and robovac, like your pool cleaner another stupid thing that turns on and cleans, but never quite good enough for you to not have to go back over its work anyway.)
It's just damn brave, damn brave thinking. I especially loved the stories of how heaven was made of precious metals with a lamb for every lap. Yes, Jesus is good to us. I hope he has a castle on the clouds and everyone just eats all day and never gets fat ot old and all ancestors back to Abraham and Adam are there to share JOY! Yeah, heaven, wow, I just can't fucking wait *bang* (Another teenage suicide brought to you by Ballmark, a better greeting card because it's been marked by hairy greasy nuts and robovac, like your pool cleaner another stupid thing that turns on and cleans, but never quite good enough for you to not have to go back over its work anyway.)
on null by Bill Z Bub
20 Jul 2003, 11:22 PM
That's why you're a pro mate. Fantastic work here, just damn fine craftsmanship.
on hermetic by Bill Z Bub
20 Jul 2003, 11:20 PM
and the candles have turned (1 note)
you tricked me with your secrets
you kept me with your chants
you held me with your blood (second note)
Besides that, you gotta know I dug it.
I'll wait to see if you edit to vote.
you tricked me with your secrets
you kept me with your chants
you held me with your blood (second note)
Besides that, you gotta know I dug it.
I'll wait to see if you edit to vote.
on far but close by KagatoSan
20 Jul 2003, 8:00 PM
in a Bar with glen close (Freed nurse) by gatogordo OBGYN
I look out my vagina.
i see the Dr., tis' a distant mustache.
Aiming at a girl,
with a pillow.
hung so testicularly.
It was soft for him.
but now it's hard for me.
She is, like a pie,
steaming in a window.
ready to get fingered!
I look out my vagina.
i see the Dr., tis' a distant mustache.
Aiming at a girl,
with a pillow.
hung so testicularly.
It was soft for him.
but now it's hard for me.
She is, like a pie,
steaming in a window.
ready to get fingered!
on Bloody Night by Ted Bundy
20 Jul 2003, 12:23 PM
The only worthwhile thing in this poem is the word "stright" which means; to write with ones teeth while in a straight jacket. The rest is pg.
replying on You wouldn't know God from Adam by horus8
20 Jul 2003, 12:14 PM
What's your user name? Because from your comment here it sounds like you're a fucking fraud. You don't have to rank any of my pieces, because I don't lose any sleep either way and I think your writing is shit, shat, and shite, cheers! look up diluted in the dictionary you fucking idiot, too, by the way. it means to weaken, thin out, please don't come over here and second guess my work. I know what I'm doing and why I select certain words. Adam, isn't smart enough to be deluding. Thank you, and carry on fuckling.
on Tears and Tombstones by OnTheOtherHand
19 Jul 2003, 7:40 PM
I'll give you a five for the last stanza because I liked it, but it was a shitslide getting there, good christ, no wonder you've distanced it from the rest of the piece.
on Joe is Dead Now by Freethinker1602
19 Jul 2003, 7:27 PM
Jesus, you're good. You should write eulogies for a living. The funeral companies would love you. For every person they buried your poetry would kill nine more in the process.
Try flowers, they smell good and contrast well against black back drops.
Try flowers, they smell good and contrast well against black back drops.
replying on You wouldn't know God from Adam by horus8
19 Jul 2003, 7:17 PM
indeed, my poor sweet collection, riddled with low scores. lol. Oh, lordy, the agony of it all. It's a given on this sight that the better the poetry, the more the zero's, and yes, those surly teens are indeed walking meat lips. Unless you are complacent poets that don't rock the boat, like god's wife, and all of those other proper poets, than of course, you can do no wrong. <horus8 lights up a doob and inhales deeply> but who in the fuck wants to live in a world of complacent poets and self loathing teens, and bible freaks? ME! ME! ME!.
replying on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Jul 2003, 6:41 PM
I disagree, and if you go through your poetry collection you will find that I'm right. I've always given you credit where it was due, and I also believe you to be a less nauseating read than scores of others.
replying on Fucking B by A sad syrupless Waffel by horus8
19 Jul 2003, 3:50 PM
That's because, I'm a professional. My car is sponsored by shoehorne, and trite with bleach, and Windowlessdex. A cleaner for windowless houses, and sometimes mouthwash.
replying on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Jul 2003, 2:46 PM
You mean like how you are in the top ten poets on this site and stuff? lol? Why do you need me to give you credit? I believe you blow enough smoke up your own ass for the two of us, you don't need my approval, you're a chirping testament to your own misconceptions. Perhaps, you just need a trophy for your mantel, or a minion to serve you up a dose of a reality. That being a slice of humble pie and a pair of glasses, because, you my friend, are on the freeway of happy meals and franchised clowns on the bike of denial.
on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Jul 2003, 1:00 PM
Usually, one must possess something in order to lose it. Glad to see you bucking trends. Maybe what you thought was a poetic edge was actually a ruptured strawberry flavored condom, and now your face is pregnant?
replying on Nigger Hole by horus8
19 Jul 2003, 12:55 PM
But thanks anyway! And good shabbas to you! Please, try to take it easy until sundown, and if you have to drive, put an ice tray under your driver's seat.