on Deadly Rape by HolyKnightOfFaith
24 Jul 2002, 5:45 PM
there are two people who have this poem.. or r u just two people?
on some deleted poem
18 Jul 2002, 8:00 PM
me things me likes *agrees with self* yup me likes
on some deleted poem
14 Jul 2002, 6:27 PM
pretty cool.. dont know if the question marks were intentional, but thats ok.. very good overall
on some deleted poem
14 Jul 2002, 6:27 PM
pretty cool.. dont know if the question marks were intentional, but thats ok.. very good overall
on lurcher for lunch - for James Kelman by roy rocket
14 Jul 2002, 6:25 PM
try to stay away from using one word so much.. it makes it quite boring that way..
on some deleted poem
14 Jul 2002, 6:23 PM
I had to read it twice to understand the beginning, but i think it s good. Keep up the writing you got potential :P.. good luck and i will talk to ya lata
on lurcher for lunch - for James Kelman by roy rocket
14 Jul 2002, 6:25 PM
try to stay away from using one word so much.. it makes it quite boring that way..