I like it. espetialy the last line of the 4th stanza.
good message 10

hummm interisting, kinda hard to fallow, but its pretty good.
8

hey thats like a discription of how i felt in highschool.... ahh the good old..... well the old days anyway. hehe
its good, one of your best, if not the best

I like it. espetialy the last line of the 4th stanza.
good message 10

good analogy, i like it. it sucks to be used then thrown out like old rag.... or chair for that matter.

hey man i know how it is, just dont kill me..... :)-9

that was good -8- not near as lame as i was expciting

I like it. espetialy the last line of the 4th stanza.
good message

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i wrote this with my g/f, she wrote the first line, i did the second and so on...
she thinks i f*cked the ending up...

i love it, very sexy..... reminds me of a situation a friend of mine is going through.... mmmmmm... oh sorry... really like the first half

i've seen alot of people in similar situations, and it usuly doesnt end very well. the more you want to change someone the more they are gonna resist you, he has to change for himself.

reminds me of a child, trying to force the square block into the circle hole... why wont this work? whats wrong with me, that i cant fix this? what am i doing wrong?...... stupid block....

crap sorry, got carried away there... anyway -9-

dont care much for jesus, but still agree with the idea, humm.. guess i can just change "god" and "jesus" to "chance" when i read it...
oh crap... better stop before i triger a religous conv.

mmmmm.....very erotic...

wow... humm... i'm kinda on the other side of this wright now, its sucks not being able to see the one you want....

very good, last part gives me an image of two people wraped up in eachother and the sheets, while laying on a huge fether bed in a clearing in a forest....

almost makes me wanna to accept jesus... it never ends that nice when i start feeling that way... usualy goes very south -9-

hummm... you like to cuddle dont you? -9-

verry good, i'd comment more, but i suddenly have a desire for a smoke... humm wonder why.. give ya a 10 for the gritt refrence

i like the begining, kinda fizzels out at the end.
try to expound on the things people do, like how you can tell when someone is interested in someone else, when they go slightly out of there way to get closer to them, or only have a responce for what that person says, ignoring everyone else in the room.... not bad though.. -7-