on Understand by Luv2write
22 Apr 2003, 9:23 AM
i think you should revise the last 3 lines
on Household Sex Agents (tooles) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
23 Apr 2003, 8:53 AM
many improtant lessons in this..... very good
10
10
on Afraid to love you by lil cindy lu who
30 May 2003, 11:23 AM
i love it
found my self singing along :) -9-
found my self singing along :) -9-
on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose
24 Apr 2003, 7:12 AM
not as good as your other ones, at least in my opinion.
still not bad, and mostly better than mine.... bastard
still not bad, and mostly better than mine.... bastard
on Twilight's Sweet Embrace by kassanna
30 May 2003, 11:22 AM
very moving -9-
on sorry, but i am lame by nolan
4 Jun 2003, 6:23 AM
that was good -8- not near as lame as i was expciting
on some deleted poem
3 Jun 2003, 6:28 AM
dont leave just cause some asses are telling you off, some people would like to read your poems and also like to have your responce to theirs.
on some deleted poem
30 May 2003, 11:26 AM
i know how it feels
very good -8-
very good -8-
on Plastic Posies by BleedingRose
29 May 2003, 5:57 AM
very nice, i should get my girlfriend some plastic posies.....oh wait i dont have one...
anyway, damn good poem.
anyway, damn good poem.
on some deleted poem
13 May 2003, 6:35 AM
ya i downed a lot one day befor school, because i heard it made you trip, well it didnt, but it did make me sick
on "Life can sure be a motherfucker." by <{Baba^Yaga}>
23 Apr 2003, 8:48 AM
very moving, i really like the last part about quoting your self befor you get to say anything :)
when sobrioty blows...
smoke a bowl.
when reailty nocks....
turn your locks.
when sobrioty blows...
smoke a bowl.
when reailty nocks....
turn your locks.
on ForMyFriend, Joneel by Luv2write
22 Apr 2003, 9:40 AM
not your best work. good though
on Poems of Love by BleedingRose
22 Apr 2003, 8:42 AM
i love line 17 thats good shit!
on What do you see by Luv2write
22 Apr 2003, 9:21 AM
i feel like that all the time.
and your probly "worthy" of more than you think
and your probly "worthy" of more than you think
on some deleted poem
22 Apr 2003, 9:28 AM
that was the most horriable poem i have ever given a 9 :)
i like the first half, second half could use a little work
i like the first half, second half could use a little work
on Techno Whore by hotwire
3 Jun 2003, 6:19 AM
I LIKE IT
on Never Better by casey
9 May 2003, 6:53 AM
very good, nice rythem
on some deleted poem
30 Apr 2003, 8:32 AM
good but it ended to abruptly