on some deleted poem
2 May 2003, 4:54 PM
I was amused, hence the blue ten.
on we're insane by nolan
4 May 2003, 5:44 PM
Perhaps, it's the cotton candy wind chimes a chiming. Then again it could be the knock of fortune at the mother door.
on Dumbfounded, dumbfucked by Bane
24 Apr 2003, 11:46 PM
A sound contraption.
on some deleted poem
4 May 2003, 5:47 PM
How about chorus times 5 and a half? With no fade out, ever.
on some deleted poem
12 May 2003, 12:17 PM
It's great. if you wrote it.
on some deleted poem
12 May 2003, 12:20 PM
Chirtelie durp dew wurp.
on some deleted poem
12 May 2003, 3:50 PM
A friend and I overdosed on nutmeg once. It was fiercely unpleasent to say the least.
on Pomona with a best friend by <{Baba^Yaga}>
12 May 2003, 4:09 PM
When you were at the MENSA center proving your Masonic doctrine on doctrines legitimate did you play pocket pool while staring at small underdeveloped asian breasts while listening to Sigh? Because witch, I'm impressed.
on some deleted poem
4 May 2003, 5:40 PM
with a sigh or a grunt?
on some deleted poem
4 May 2003, 6:31 PM
Please tell me this was an exercise in pure cynicism. Because this is to poetry what kareokee is to poetry.
on some deleted poem
4 May 2003, 6:39 PM
I personally feel at a loss when I'm grasping art that I cannot sense.
on Crush Rejected by thepinkbunnyofdoom
4 May 2003, 7:10 PM
I cried or wept blood would be a stonger action.
The Eldorado reference sucks and so does the emo thing lose them, and then maybe you'll be closer. To what? I have no fucking clue.
The Eldorado reference sucks and so does the emo thing lose them, and then maybe you'll be closer. To what? I have no fucking clue.
on We be free by blurryphotograph
4 May 2003, 7:23 PM
"as the pyramids burn" Be smart, change this to librarys, because of the obvious, that being the impossibilty of burning stone, ever. And definitrly add more commas and fix Phoenix immediately. Because that is one of those mispells that can't slide by, ever.
on some deleted poem
2 May 2003, 12:35 PM
Hand towels and grout my friend. Thoses are the staples of life.
on some deleted poem
2 May 2003, 4:26 PM
I would call this simply. "A hump for Jesus" Thereby, forcing the reader to ponder the immensity of such an act inthe title out the gate. Then your poem will garnish the side of the plate (title) like a sprite toss of parsely should should indeed always garnish the side of say, a plate. Or you could just call it "A plate". What do you think?
on some deleted poem
2 May 2003, 12:38 PM
Yes, sometimes chemistry goes well beyond chemicals. Well beyond God.
on Round Here by asimpleman
27 Apr 2003, 10:22 PM
Well, round here, a double double with cheese (animal style) meal deal at In & out is 5 bucks, and that my friend is Democracy with a vanilla sheik and change for a pack of gum.
on some deleted poem
25 Apr 2003, 8:51 PM
Once I had a lemonade stand that only served to the four legged. But then it got impounded by the law.
on some deleted poem
12 May 2003, 4:29 PM
Because, you are an android.