poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Jeremi B. Handrinos (381-400) and replies

Comments byJeremi B. Handrinos, 381–400 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Hollow Dreams by Alyssa91 29 May 2003, 11:40 AM
Have you tried a logenze?
replying on While cleaning the aviary by Jeremi B. Handrinos 29 May 2003, 11:38 AM
Aviary, thank you Robert, and good morning.
on Being Here by Miggy 27 May 2003, 8:15 PM
"And for that one day that will be together" we'll
The pepsi challenge beats tab in the polls.
on I Am(Defined) by lil cindy lu who 27 May 2003, 7:51 PM
Likable enough.
replying on I am an genius, and you're a stupid turd by Shardik 27 May 2003, 7:49 PM
No, just testing my new nucleur fly swatter. Even if you miss one on the table the sonic slap of it kills all of the windowed ones in that room, spectacular que no?
replying on Skull fucking Miggy, a list, by Iggy Poppy by Bachus 21 May 2003, 12:52 AM
Good god, tell me about it.
replying on Expired (early horus8 before the change) by Jeremi B. Handrinos 21 May 2003, 12:47 AM
No need to, my poetry now does that, this is to show the kids they too, can evolve into a fat free monster. this is from my childhood, and I like it fat and unsure of itself.
ha ha hee. KabooM!
on form: aware by Poetsettle 14 May 2003, 7:01 AM
Your new homepage is simply a work of infinite joy. I am moved. I knew you had the gift, but lordy, lordy. Sheer genius. As perfect as a steaming clump of peat.
"Yet heretofore" This opening was most delightful to mine eye. So was that you flipping me off then a while back with the greeting card? how you got a luscious asian hotty into the body of a 60 some odd year old lord of the graphic arts manor. A work of pumping valor, I tell you. I am wheeping openly in a tinfoil protected room currently, dodging solar flares, but I'll come out for some of your fine tutilage. And send me all of the books ASAP, I want to steal some of your sacred oats of regularitty.
on form: haiku cinquain by Poetsettle 14 May 2003, 6:49 AM
Well, isn't this pleasant. Taming your hair again I see.
replying on CHAMELEON by Jeremi B. Handrinos 14 May 2003, 6:43 AM
One can merely pray for a miracle, i assume. Fodder in the wind.
on fuck that bitch by Lucifer 12 May 2003, 10:19 PM
Very lucid and I'm sure rewarding.
on Done with all the mess by ILoveUandHim 12 May 2003, 10:10 PM
What if you said "that's a promise motherfucker" don't you feel that would be more poignant?
on Pomona with a best friend by <{Baba^Yaga}> 12 May 2003, 4:09 PM
When you were at the MENSA center proving your Masonic doctrine on doctrines legitimate did you play pocket pool while staring at small underdeveloped asian breasts while listening to Sigh? Because witch, I'm impressed.
replying on The band "Sigh" aced their MENSA tests by Jeremi B. Handrinos 12 May 2003, 12:14 PM
Probably because I wanted to say "Maybe your face, but not mine" therefore, I did. See how that works? I didn't say "No, you" or "go away" because those are two ridiculously impossible statements from your brain not mine, fuckling. Get it.
on We be free by blurryphotograph 4 May 2003, 7:23 PM
"as the pyramids burn" Be smart, change this to librarys, because of the obvious, that being the impossibilty of burning stone, ever. And definitrly add more commas and fix Phoenix immediately. Because that is one of those mispells that can't slide by, ever.
on Crush Rejected by thepinkbunnyofdoom 4 May 2003, 7:10 PM
I cried or wept blood would be a stonger action.
The Eldorado reference sucks and so does the emo thing lose them, and then maybe you'll be closer. To what? I have no fucking clue.
on we're insane by nolan 4 May 2003, 5:44 PM
Perhaps, it's the cotton candy wind chimes a chiming. Then again it could be the knock of fortune at the mother door.
replying on Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger 2 May 2003, 4:29 PM
BEEN DONE ON HORSEBACK. DULLESTITUDE