on Witch to Wicca by Lenore
23 Jan 2003, 4:17 PM
What powerful images. I feel the ritual very plainly. Some questionable lines as far as flow goes, but overall a very powerful piece.
on The Good Old Days in New Orleans by cobalt
23 Jan 2003, 4:11 PM
Very nice. That last line took me aback. I had to re-read it to make sure I read it correctly. Good imaging.
on some deleted poem
19 Jan 2003, 5:26 PM
Very nice. Cool images there. Very real.
on Little Bird by Blindpoetry
21 Dec 2003, 6:19 PM
Cute, simple.
I like the feeling of dependancy, coupled with the feeling of want. And all of this expressed with bargaining, but a mutual kind. The kind that is best found with a good friend.
I like the feeling of dependancy, coupled with the feeling of want. And all of this expressed with bargaining, but a mutual kind. The kind that is best found with a good friend.