replying on The Importance of Mr. Straughter by GregDeEgg
12 Feb 2003, 7:59 PM
Out of curiosity, what do you say the fritter stands for?
replying on The Importance of Mr. Straughter by GregDeEgg
12 Feb 2003, 6:05 PM
I really don't like to tell people what the poem means. The fritter could be any number of things.
on Witch to Wicca by Lenore
23 Jan 2003, 4:17 PM
What powerful images. I feel the ritual very plainly. Some questionable lines as far as flow goes, but overall a very powerful piece.
on The Good Old Days in New Orleans by cobalt
23 Jan 2003, 4:11 PM
Very nice. That last line took me aback. I had to re-read it to make sure I read it correctly. Good imaging.
I like the feeling of dependancy, coupled with the feeling of want. And all of this expressed with bargaining, but a mutual kind. The kind that is best found with a good friend.