poemranker ::20 most recent comments by liquidlama

Comments byliquidlama, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on Never Forget by HipHopChick 16 Jul 2002, 9:57 PM
Nice and short, has a point. You coulda done without the 'chorus' part.
on Best Friends by ashtar 17 Jul 2002, 12:33 AM
Friendship troubles....damn
on some deleted poem 22 Nov 2002, 11:30 AM
I like it. the sand in the wrinkled palm
on Dear Dad by liquidlama 19 Jul 2002, 9:56 PM
Its more than an idea forestchild7.
on some deleted poem 17 Jul 2002, 12:24 AM
If Ice Cube was a young, white surburban kid, this would be the inspiration for that 'Good Day' song/video
on Wipe Before You Weep by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 17 Jul 2002, 12:40 AM
Damnit! All peoms don't have to be serious,meaningful, or whatever to be good! this is funny! I say a five you
on moon rants by bluwiz 16 Jul 2002, 11:31 PM
the teenage moon an unconfident, whiney rock....I like it.
on Virus by bluwiz 16 Jul 2002, 11:39 PM
Damn, its like your poems seem shallow and kinda dumb to me on first read (prob. my own artistic ignorance)but then they're really very good. really like your work, more!
on Rented Romance by OneFingerAnswer 17 Jul 2002, 12:01 AM
lmao@Dark_Angel...I had the same thought!. But if ur talking about real people/relationships its a pretty good poem.