on I AM... by CHUNMOON
16 Nov 2003, 4:33 PM
The funniest read EVER! 10.
on Styx by heartlessempath
16 Nov 2003, 10:33 PM
"Self-necromancy" alone, is worthy of some poetic merit. A button, a flag, something. When I figure it out we'll raise it out of our dead bodies. Hopefully, manually.
on some deleted poem
16 Nov 2003, 11:17 PM
Everytime I see this :o)?
I think of the parenthesis?
As a chin.
I think of the parenthesis?
As a chin.
on free by Freethinker1602
17 Nov 2003, 12:19 AM
Slut.
on some deleted poem
18 Nov 2003, 12:00 AM
A great lyric.
on some deleted poem
18 Nov 2003, 1:27 PM
I like this. Thanks for the lesson. Naturally, I have to write a better one now. You understand of course, but for now, I must say, I would give this a ten, but war in general just bores the Bejesus out of me. Especially the ones where everyone's crying in them. 9.
on Joe is Dead Now by Freethinker1602
20 Nov 2003, 7:57 PM
A better edit.
on You're Good by Freethinker1602
20 Nov 2003, 7:58 PM
unguarded.
on some deleted poem
20 Nov 2003, 8:01 PM
it never stops with five.
on Untitled by unknown
20 Nov 2003, 8:02 PM
Adjectiving to death.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2003, 6:50 PM
Entirely too unreadable.
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2003, 12:15 PM
Did you thumb through it? Or pull the pages fom one another with the entire side of your face?
on Mr. Haiku showed up at my door- so I by Shit-Crumpets
26 Nov 2003, 12:18 PM
Swish.
on Supercharged by Nicholas Jones
26 Nov 2003, 12:20 PM
Yerp.
on cause & Affect by kingit
26 Nov 2003, 1:13 PM
The hand that kills is mustard.
The hand that saves is mustard.
The hand that saves is mustard.
on For Brianna by MaliqaTara
30 Nov 2003, 6:33 PM
Touching, yet oddly funny and strange. Almost fictionish.
on voices on the bus by Crakyamuni
30 Nov 2003, 3:08 PM
Your end tosses a great poem, and there's a "your" that should be a "you are" in the beginning. You had me going there, for a minute there. A nice try 7.
on Down on Dogs by Bobjim
30 Nov 2003, 5:53 PM
Bob weave bob weave bob weave bob.