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free

Member since 2003 · Posted 16 Nov 2003 · 4 comments

Here I am fallen to my knees And still I cannot break free I want to be alone So I can save my sanity But I just can't break free Last night you held me It felt so good to feel your heart beating Even though I knew it was fleeting It still felt freeing I'm still trapped here in this place And still I feel low I've got to break free And save myself from misery take in these last moments For they will only be a memory As I slip from your arms And fade from your life As forever more I break free

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[7] Shardik 17-Nov-03/12:19 AM Reply

Slut.

[n/a] Freethinker1602 17-Nov-03/12:38 AM Reply

I've only written about 4 guys. sure fine... but I've only felt this about one of them

[n/a] Freethinker1602 17-Nov-03/7:38 PM Reply

I wanna scream so loudly I deafen myself
I wanna beat the walls around me till they fall
Iâm not gonna allow myself to be put that low
Not gonna stand for what others put me through
They can judge me and I say fuck that
I am who I am and I donât think I deserve anything less
If you fuck me over I fuck you up
Donât come messinâ with me Iâm too risky
When Iâm done with you, youâll wish youâd followed that bright light at the end of the tunnel

[n/a] Freethinker1602 › Freethinker1602 17-Nov-03/7:38 PM Reply

he pissed me off.