on Death by dougsoderstrom
26 May 2003, 9:40 PM
Decent but as I'm sure you've been told runs long
on Silent Hunger by kassanna
27 May 2003, 12:37 PM
Ouch! thats so brilliant, It makes my head hurt. Discovery of a Simple Truth. -10-
on some deleted poem
27 May 2003, 12:40 PM
Why would you want to see D.A. Naked?
on some deleted poem
27 May 2003, 12:55 PM
Incomplete D-
See Me After Class
-Your 10th Grade English Teacher-
-6-
See Me After Class
-Your 10th Grade English Teacher-
-6-
on A Summers Day In Stolen Eden by Mr Pig
27 May 2003, 5:52 PM
Truely Worthy of Being dedicated to our Fine Feathered Friend. -10-
on some deleted poem
27 May 2003, 12:51 PM
Uh huh, and?
on Over and Gone by Miggy
27 May 2003, 1:07 PM
I've been there before and it sux AWARDE. -10-
Great writing this, If you ever record it as a song let me know.
Great writing this, If you ever record it as a song let me know.
on No Tomorrow by Miggy
27 May 2003, 1:13 PM
-10-
on Time flies (or why i never have time on my hands) by blurryphotograph
27 May 2003, 1:19 PM
Quite Poetic, Similar to One of D.A.'s recent poems, but yours is actually a poem. -10-
on a new generation by blurryphotograph
27 May 2003, 1:23 PM
Amazingly well done.
on Gunshy Martyr by blurryphotograph
27 May 2003, 1:26 PM
LOL, humorish. -9-
on George Bush, Jesus Christ, and the good ole US of A! by dougsoderstrom
26 May 2003, 10:02 PM
Christain, Christain, Christian. Jesu have mercy on your soul, you take one concept and apply it while forgetting all the rest. For instance, Judge lest not ye be judged, love thy neighbor, and you ignore the majority of christian history. How many crusades have there been? George's point of view(or the one he has tryed to express) is that he is helping his nieghbor(Iraq) by being its doctor and cutting out the diseased tissue. Look you have faith in god right? Well I have to call you one of little faith. If god, has a plan for everything, than he has a reason to have W. leading our nation. Cap him all you want but don't dog his faith cause you don't believe that for whatever reason he should be there.
P.S. Christ is supposedly perfect, Men are not. Remember that.
P.S. Christ is supposedly perfect, Men are not. Remember that.
on Fit for a King by dougsoderstrom
26 May 2003, 9:45 PM
Left Wing all the way, even if I some what agree with what you have to say, more opinion that poem. Try maybe you should try ryhming.
on some deleted poem
27 May 2003, 12:59 PM
Alright, but lacks all but a trace of emotion. Hard to get into, feels like your writing from too great a distance for me to connect. -7-
on some deleted poem
27 May 2003, 12:44 PM
Interesting and confusing. -9-
on Under a Streetlight in Paris by blurryphotograph
27 May 2003, 1:29 PM
Deserving so much more, but it'll have to do. -10-
on Being Here by Miggy
27 May 2003, 1:16 PM
Well written and Enjoyed very much. -10-
on some deleted poem
27 May 2003, 12:50 PM
Yig!