Chopped it off, do you mean the end?, because the more i read it the more it does sound a little upbrupt. Any insight into it would be good. I'll let you use it...Cheers.

Thanx..

Very nicely put....Thanx for that!

Why can't all my poems be about love?..I'm glad people have the ability to write about other things that they find worthy, but there is no law that says that someone has to cover every aspect of life in their writings...it would be like telling Stephen King to write a mills and boon book because you don't like reading horror. I appreciate your comment, but i'm a sentimentalist and don't see myself changing anytime soon...

Thank you....and thanks also for the spelling correction.

Inches just doesn't sit with me and why do you want me to read those two??

Why bad news....

Thank you for that comment, i had a hell of a time trying to find a better way of phrasing what i wanted to say. You did it after one reading....Cheers

Thanx for the comments, I like to write thats what i do best(in my eyes anyway). I just wanted to put this poem in and get feedback for all the positive and negative aspects. I'm open to suggestions and appreciate the fact that you took time out to read it and comment.