on Snow Day by Standby
20 Mar 2004, 3:33 PM
Are you sure you didn't see yourself, someone should fuck your shit up for writing this.
on The darkest woods ever by Shardik
31 Jan 2003, 10:08 AM
Shardik, I have a coment for you. BREAK FREE! Your material is interesting, if a little metaphysical, but you base your writing too much on rules, amd so your expression gets lost. Blame your english teachers, they impressed your mind way too much.