on some deleted poem
4 Mar 2003, 1:54 PM
Beautiful language that you used. Keep up the great poetry =)
on some deleted poem
4 Mar 2003, 8:06 AM
Great theme. I love the voice of your poem. Friendship is rarely combined with heroism, and originality is what kicks. Great poem. Keep up the good work.
on A Vietnam Homecoming by scitz
4 Mar 2003, 6:45 PM
Very powerful.
on some deleted poem
4 Mar 2003, 3:01 PM
Very insightful. Keep writing, I'd love to see more of your work.
on Dance With Me by marvelis
4 Mar 2003, 1:59 PM
Very romantic. Nice useage of language. Keep writing, it's wonderful.
on some deleted poem
4 Mar 2003, 1:56 PM
I love it! Keep writing, I'd love to read more.
on Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL
4 Mar 2003, 11:29 AM
Oh my. I love it! Haven't seen anything like that. At first I was like "Well this is stupid" but I totally changed my mind. This poem blows my mind! Mind if I print it out and show it to a few of my friends? Keep writing. You rawk as far as I'm concerned.
on great caesar's ghost by bondjedi
4 Mar 2003, 11:17 AM
Degrading towards women...focus your poetry away from offending language.
on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
4 Mar 2003, 8:10 AM
You create good points, but you use stereotypes which are not needed. And what's really uneccessary is puting usernames at the bottom. Let them deal with their own poetry and you your's. I see you want whats best for the world of poetry, and what's best is letting the creativity of the world flow into one. That way. Poetry can't die. You have talent. Use it for a theme more useful.
on some deleted poem
4 Mar 2003, 8:03 AM
Haiku limits words that are needed for emotion. But on the other hand the theme was excellent. Try using what you learned in English, it could help. But who am I to tell you? Do what you want, you're writing is great without me.
on some deleted poem
4 Mar 2003, 6:43 PM
I'm lost. . . nevertheless it sounds pretty awesome, keep writing.
on some deleted poem
5 Mar 2003, 7:33 PM
Very good =D I like how you used your words to create a nice flow and suspense =) I'll be checking out more of your work.
on some deleted poem
4 Mar 2003, 3:02 PM
Interesting . . .
on some deleted poem
4 Mar 2003, 3:04 PM
Nice, I'd like to read more of your writing.
on The Kansas City Chiefs suck by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Mar 2003, 11:20 AM
Doesn't make much sense... but who am I to judge? Keep writing.
on Life's Loves Lost by Jigg
4 Mar 2003, 6:48 PM
Very nice. Talent overflow! You rawk.