replying on Scars by H0LL0WxL1F3
5 Mar 2003, 7:30 PM
I'm glad you like my poem =) I'll check out your poem A.S.A.P.. Thank you for your comment =)
replying on Scars by H0LL0WxL1F3
5 Mar 2003, 7:28 PM
Thank you for your comment =)
on Life's Loves Lost by Jigg
4 Mar 2003, 6:48 PM
Very nice. Talent overflow! You rawk.
on A Vietnam Homecoming by scitz
4 Mar 2003, 6:45 PM
Very powerful.
on Dance With Me by marvelis
4 Mar 2003, 1:59 PM
Very romantic. Nice useage of language. Keep writing, it's wonderful.
replying on Scars by H0LL0WxL1F3
4 Mar 2003, 1:51 PM
Immaturity makes such a good poet like you look bad. As for bringing Durt into this, just because he chose to correct grammer, and I chose to like his poetry, does not mean that it fits anywhere in your comment. Also, I'd like to inform you that the poem is fictional. I do not cut. I could just delete this horrible comment off, but I like critisicm. It feeds my poetry. I'd like the world to see how immature some people can be in a world where we should not have any imaturity. I will not be replying to anything else you say or send to me. I will not be as immature as to post nasty comments on your wonderful poetry. Goodbye.
replying on The Kansas City Chiefs suck by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Mar 2003, 11:55 AM
Don't be rude, it's not necessary.
on Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL
4 Mar 2003, 11:29 AM
Oh my. I love it! Haven't seen anything like that. At first I was like "Well this is stupid" but I totally changed my mind. This poem blows my mind! Mind if I print it out and show it to a few of my friends? Keep writing. You rawk as far as I'm concerned.
on The Kansas City Chiefs suck by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Mar 2003, 11:20 AM
Doesn't make much sense... but who am I to judge? Keep writing.
on great caesar's ghost by bondjedi
4 Mar 2003, 11:17 AM
Degrading towards women...focus your poetry away from offending language.
on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
4 Mar 2003, 8:10 AM
You create good points, but you use stereotypes which are not needed. And what's really uneccessary is puting usernames at the bottom. Let them deal with their own poetry and you your's. I see you want whats best for the world of poetry, and what's best is letting the creativity of the world flow into one. That way. Poetry can't die. You have talent. Use it for a theme more useful.