on The Heart of a Man by Queen of Tease
27 Jul 2003, 1:14 PM
Damn
What have men done to you?
Or what have they not done for you?
What have men done to you?
Or what have they not done for you?
replying on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek
27 Jul 2003, 1:11 PM
sure i meant guy in the sterile not sexist way.......
i mean now that you've told me that it is about marraige i can see that...but if one would read it w/o being told they will have a hard time in figuring it out and prolly will not be able to
i mean now that you've told me that it is about marraige i can see that...but if one would read it w/o being told they will have a hard time in figuring it out and prolly will not be able to
on The Rose by Queen of Tease
27 Jul 2003, 1:09 PM
sweet little poem
"in it's rose colored wear"
i don't think a rose has one certain color.
One can prolly saw RED but they can also be white, pink, orange, a mix of all the three, or even violet.
and you used rose in the line above so it sounds repettitive.
"gentle perfume there for my nose to consume"
is a nice rhyme but the word consume makes me think of eating up everything greedily. gentle/consume sounds kinda weird unless you meant it.
u should keep it in a vase with water
or it will wither and dry
"in it's rose colored wear"
i don't think a rose has one certain color.
One can prolly saw RED but they can also be white, pink, orange, a mix of all the three, or even violet.
and you used rose in the line above so it sounds repettitive.
"gentle perfume there for my nose to consume"
is a nice rhyme but the word consume makes me think of eating up everything greedily. gentle/consume sounds kinda weird unless you meant it.
u should keep it in a vase with water
or it will wither and dry
replying on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek
27 Jul 2003, 1:04 PM
eh the thought of marraige rarely enters this 20 year olds mind
so maybe i did not see it.
i however own a kayak and would never rent one
so maybe i did not see it.
i however own a kayak and would never rent one
replying on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek
27 Jul 2003, 1:02 PM
rented dildos...hmm
u could start a biz that does that
you can set Rent-a-Dicks up at various
motels across the country.
i'd recommend the Hilton.
Maybe you can get the two Hilton sisters to be spokeswomen
or even teh Olsen sisters
u could start a biz that does that
you can set Rent-a-Dicks up at various
motels across the country.
i'd recommend the Hilton.
Maybe you can get the two Hilton sisters to be spokeswomen
or even teh Olsen sisters
replying on Monument by geewhiz1962
27 Jul 2003, 12:58 PM
ok totally ingronre the comment above
i'm retarded
lol
Im FUCKING retarded
i'm retarded
lol
Im FUCKING retarded
replying on Monument by geewhiz1962
27 Jul 2003, 12:57 PM
i like this work in progress
your style is very prosy
i like it
did the helium tank really explode? lol
only prob i really have is
"the bangs had drawn a sweaty crowd of spectators....."
it seems too laid back and chill for seomthing that is
thrilling and exciting and crazy.
i hope to see the finished work
your style is very prosy
i like it
did the helium tank really explode? lol
only prob i really have is
"the bangs had drawn a sweaty crowd of spectators....."
it seems too laid back and chill for seomthing that is
thrilling and exciting and crazy.
i hope to see the finished work
replying on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek
27 Jul 2003, 12:51 PM
well one needs to use it in a poem like this one
becuz i have no idea what this guy is talking about.
technically it could even be a paintball gun or Skis or even a dildo like you said.
becuz i have no idea what this guy is talking about.
technically it could even be a paintball gun or Skis or even a dildo like you said.
replying on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek
27 Jul 2003, 12:46 PM
Oh
I thought it was a U-Haul
I thought it was a U-Haul
on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek
27 Jul 2003, 12:40 PM
Hmm...
What is 'it'?
What is 'it'?
replying on #1 entry from Chico, the star stalker on Pico by <{Baba^Yaga}>
27 Jul 2003, 12:36 PM
we also set them up in the ghettos
and sell that shit to blacks and
get rich off them
and thenwe buy our new ass homes
in the hills where there are no
blacks
but then when the blacks riot
over stupid shit then they burn down our
stores and the cycle happens all over again
so simba
that is how the ghetto works
and sell that shit to blacks and
get rich off them
and thenwe buy our new ass homes
in the hills where there are no
blacks
but then when the blacks riot
over stupid shit then they burn down our
stores and the cycle happens all over again
so simba
that is how the ghetto works
replying on #1 entry from Chico, the star stalker on Pico by <{Baba^Yaga}>
27 Jul 2003, 12:34 PM
fuck you!
RACIST!
haha
RACIST!
haha
replying on #1 entry from Chico, the star stalker on Pico by <{Baba^Yaga}>
27 Jul 2003, 12:34 PM
it's cuz we're communal creatures
kind of like ants
we're all sterile
which accounts for our small penises
and we only listen to our queen
who is a big whore
kind of like ants
we're all sterile
which accounts for our small penises
and we only listen to our queen
who is a big whore
on Memoirs II by http://mulberryfairy
26 Jul 2003, 11:32 PM
that's great
seriously
it is
seriously
it is
replying on Poemranker's Recent Infestation of Teenage Girls by 68.75.19.117
26 Jul 2003, 11:31 PM
yea sure
replying on #1 entry from Chico, the star stalker on Pico by <{Baba^Yaga}>
26 Jul 2003, 11:29 PM
i didn't mean suck my dickl
i just got home
and i'm drunk now
i would like to solve this
pecasfully so ignore
my negative comments earlier
but i am not a racist
i sayd fucking kroeans and theri kareoke
cuz i am kroean and i understand korean obseesion
with that fucking cursed device
i had to deal with my paretns invititng
their friendss over every weeeknd night to sing
horribly in fron to of our fuking tv
ogodnith
i just got home
and i'm drunk now
i would like to solve this
pecasfully so ignore
my negative comments earlier
but i am not a racist
i sayd fucking kroeans and theri kareoke
cuz i am kroean and i understand korean obseesion
with that fucking cursed device
i had to deal with my paretns invititng
their friendss over every weeeknd night to sing
horribly in fron to of our fuking tv
ogodnith
replying on #1 entry from Chico, the star stalker on Pico by <{Baba^Yaga}>
26 Jul 2003, 11:27 PM
u think i'm racist?
ha ok
my white castle poem
was about stereotypes
saying NIGGER and SPIC
doesn't always have to
mean to be racist
they are words
strong words
i wasn't trying to be a
neo nazi son of hitler shit
ok?
and i used racials slurs in ONE fucking poems
so why don't you stfu
ha ok
my white castle poem
was about stereotypes
saying NIGGER and SPIC
doesn't always have to
mean to be racist
they are words
strong words
i wasn't trying to be a
neo nazi son of hitler shit
ok?
and i used racials slurs in ONE fucking poems
so why don't you stfu
replying on #1 entry from Chico, the star stalker on Pico by <{Baba^Yaga}>
26 Jul 2003, 11:22 PM
hey
fuck you
i am korean
so suck my dick
fuck you
i am korean
so suck my dick
on Kakistocracy by <{Baba^Yaga}>
25 Jul 2003, 1:58 PM
what is kakistocracy
that's great