Re: Have you ever heard of William Carlost Williams 24 by notule	10-Mar-03/3:12 PM
Wow
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Mar-03/1:57 PM
I did not know virtual love could be so satisfying. Some nice lines. 8/10
Re: Threnody by Nanshe	11-Mar-03/9:31 PM
Amazing. 10. Who did you write this for?
Re: Limericks of hot seething love, gone bad. by horus8	11-Mar-03/8:33 PM
And the point of your poem is the following: Stay with the hag you have until you fall in love with her since you have no balls to leave. Been there done that. How old are you? 21? 3 for effort.
Re: Anna N. Smiths vagina monologue in Evangelistic tongues by horus8	11-Mar-03/8:35 PM
Are you seriously that bored with your life that you have nothing better to do than to write crappy poems about Anna-Nicole Smith? Whoever watches that show should be hung. No wonder american television is pure and utter crap. Morons like you who watch this shit are supporting it. 0 for wasting my time.
Re: Invisible too by horus8	11-Mar-03/8:38 PM
Better than your other ones. Here's a 5. My favorite part of this poem was your use of Incommunicado. How brave and original you are!
Re: Prest by GregDeEgg	11-Mar-03/8:41 PM
What the fuck?
Re: our little secret by famenglory	11-Mar-03/8:45 PM
Oh, okay. My lips are sealed. What? And your point is?
Re: Contention by Drummer	11-Mar-03/8:49 PM
Something I like. The flow works really well here. 9
Re: Blustered by INTRANSIT	11-Mar-03/9:10 PM
Can you come up with a better title? You don't title your other poems Free Verse, do you?
Re: We by Nanshe	11-Mar-03/9:37 PM
Are you getting married? That's the idea that I am getting.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Mar-03/12:35 PM
Why would you even post this here? It's not poetry.
Re: Hecate, and the high hunt by <{Baba^Yaga}>	9-Mar-03/12:01 PM
Curved evil breasts--how can breasts be evil? Can you use a better metaphor?
Re: Family Portrait by Mr Pig	10-Mar-03/4:10 PM
I re-read it and I liked it much better the second time around. It's amazing how much you miss by reading things once. Here's a 9. By the way, my father also had a mistress so I can identify. Every summer we would go to the beach together as mom stayed at home. She made my dad happy so he treated my mom even better. I do not necessarily thing that it is a bad thing to have one as long as you can manage to keep everyone happy.
Re: this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub	8-Mar-03/9:50 PM
and rubs his hands, his empty hands. isn't it obvious that they're empty?
Re: Family Portrait by Mr Pig	10-Mar-03/3:02 PM
Reads like a short story. Traditional. Nothing new. Some nice images.
Re: Keanu Vs The mystery of life by Shardik	9-Mar-03/5:12 PM
You are an excellent poet!
Re: My pimp's ceiling fan by Shardik	9-Mar-03/7:45 PM
You're a great poet, and a 7.5! You are a composer, really? Did not like your music too much. Sorry. You sound like a beaver being gang raped. I bet that's how you got the name gang box, smart guy. With an IQ of 54, you really don't impress me. Go write some more impressive poetry now. shooo
Re: Stand in line for nothingness by Crakyamuni	10-Mar-03/4:06 PM
Break it up and shorten it. That would give it more of a punch.