on some deleted poem
22 Jan 2007, 3:14 AM
You write like a simpleton who has been smoking too much weed.
What vote would you give this?
What vote would you give this?
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2007, 5:38 AM
As satisfying as a bowl of tramp trifle and as wholesome as a plate of corpse mustard.
on Same old rancour (a yellow stream of consciousness) by ecargo
15 Jan 2007, 5:27 AM
No idea what you're on about old bean, but I'll give you a ten anyway.
on Brains for Barter by Dovina
15 Jan 2007, 5:32 AM
I've had wind which has resulted in the runs. Terrible, you have my sympathy; although I wouldn't condone publicising the fact.
on some deleted poem
18 Jan 2007, 7:14 AM
I really like this. I love the last two lines most of all.
A poem of such importance as this should have a special display case manufactured. And the sign attached to that display case should be annotated with the simple, yet powerful words: "Here are words of such crushingly strong significance that to read them is to stare at one's own reflection and see to the very core of one's soul. I caution you reader that once read you will never look upon the hollow husk of your former life without feeling a jolt of sorrow for the unenlightened former you which cowered like some kind of terribly liquidised mollusc in a puddle of ignorance." - 8 -
on The man who loved Lennon by Caducus
19 Jan 2007, 7:45 AM
I preferred Ringo.
on almost 12.30 by Dental Panic
19 Jan 2007, 8:44 AM
Powerful use of overture, with a fission of piquant denotation. It starts as a veritable romp around avenue failure before firting with the bridge of disaster only to be swept along by a torrent of unutterable excellence.
on Alternatives by Dovina
31 Jan 2007, 5:26 AM
Why do you get so many comments on your poems? they are veritable common rooms for 'rankers. And, in much the same way as a common room is an empty vessel waiting for the chatter of a bunch of "know it all" spotty drug addicts with amusingly grown facial hair, the appearance of the room is of little import in connection with conversations had therein.
on some deleted poem
6 Feb 2007, 8:32 AM
Anybody who is anybody knows that you were sired by Mr and Mrs Beavers from Narnia ( http://www.pop-arena.com/articles/narnia
on some deleted poem
7 Feb 2007, 1:21 AM
I love the use of brackets to signify a winking aside to the rest of us! This is even better when one considers the juxtaposition of one exclamation mark with another!! emphasising the undoubted comic nature of this limerick. In summary, a triumph of good natured, pragmatic humour over the death of a pet which would have indubitably served as a cathartic meditation for the author.
I believe it is stretching poetic licence to suggest that flowers could toss a girl. A girl could toss with flowers, a girl could be tossed with flowers, but importantly a flower could not toss a girl. The next two lines read like something out of a wanna-be bridget jones romcom fiction book that's free with this months peoples friend. "But again never comes" is the most bow'ls thing I have ever, ever read.
on some deleted poem
7 Feb 2007, 4:25 AM
This is the most terribly obvious nonsense I have read on this site.
on love cycle by j_beckfield
7 Feb 2007, 4:26 AM
I think this is terribly clever, and what's more it rhymes!!!!
on untitled #2 by venusdemilo
7 Feb 2007, 4:27 AM
A really good point, why do people fight over ethnicity. Is it because blacks no longer know their place or because we have become soft?
on One Size Fits Most by Lenore
7 Feb 2007, 4:28 AM
wow the spacing on this is really really big.
on some deleted poem
7 Feb 2007, 1:23 AM
Excellent.
Were designed to please,
Those who suffer,
From homosexual disease.