replying on Biological Excuse by psikosis
28 May 2003, 7:19 PM
Interesting, though it was about my mom pummeling me with blows to the face with her fist. lol. I want people to feel what I felt, what I feel now.
replying on D.E.A.D. I.N.S.I.D.E. by psikosis
28 May 2003, 7:16 PM
what the hell does that mean?
on The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
9 May 2003, 10:40 AM
Very good dark angel. I wonder about this line though..."and findeth he an girl to rape, as should an gentelman!" Why would a gentleman rape someone? Is there some meaning behind this line? Very good though, I like the way you used words in this, kind of old english.
on Totem Pole by horus8
9 May 2003, 10:31 AM
decent lyrics horus, but a part in there reminds me, in fact, it is taken right from a doors song...cops in cars, the topless bars...never saw a woman, so alone...ring a bell?! Try to be more original. The rest was pretty cool, reminded me of System of a Down.
First of all "horus8", I don't consider myself a "tough guy." Second of all I would never listen to siouxe and the banshees! I just write what comes out, and I gladly accept constructive criticism, but not flat out mean comments from some one who doesn't understand where I was coming from. Yes, a real man does shed tears, and that capital R had nothing to do with it.