on hehehe by Freethinker1602
18 May 2003, 9:33 PM
I've heard enough teenage preachiness
on Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL
13 May 2003, 5:42 PM
Just like the squirrel in the broke-ass car man. That was great.
on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
18 May 2003, 9:38 PM
clever 8
on some deleted poem
18 May 2003, 7:26 PM
I really like the imagery of the old dead man, but I don't the the phrase old dead man.
on some deleted poem
13 May 2003, 6:06 PM
Although I like the structure and language of the poem, its seems a little Hallmark to me. "You helped me see the Light" has to go. I like the first stanza a lot though. Work in that realm more