poemranker ::20 most recent comments by <~> (1961-1980) and replies

Comments by<~>, 1961–1980 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Beauty, Beware by Jsylum 17 Jul 2002, 7:06 AM
i like the first 2 stanzas, but the 3rd leaves me unsatisfied
on Sea Struck by Jsylum 17 Jul 2002, 7:04 AM
rock me in the cradle of this soft sursurrant sea
on THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8 17 Jul 2002, 7:03 AM
left-in-the-lurch loquatious leo vs. leaving lesbian lawyer...a jaunty little tale
on Birth in the Valley of Liquor by horus8 17 Jul 2002, 6:40 AM
ah, but do you know how flammable i can get....especially in high gear at my well-programmed best?