on I DON'T SMILE ANYMORE by longships
1 Aug 2002, 2:21 PM
what happened to you? you lived through hell, and came home to find a more insidious trap sprung. may your wounds heal, and may you find peace.
on recent submissions by <~>
1 Aug 2002, 1:31 PM
just add alcohol, and ativan?
on Through the eyes of life by Angel_of_fait
1 Aug 2002, 1:24 PM
seek understanding / ye unripe adolescents / but not on this site.
on Thinkin of ya! by KezzY20
1 Aug 2002, 10:59 AM
PLEASE. STOP. NOW. BEFORE SOMEONE GETS HURT.
on Life/Death (revised) by devotedwonder
1 Aug 2002, 8:35 AM
if you feel the need to change so as not to offend, poetry is not for you.
on Life/Death (revised) by devotedwonder
1 Aug 2002, 7:05 AM
a line is drawn. i stand with the dead fetuses.
on The Long Night by Tangerines
31 Jul 2002, 11:20 AM
waiting, like your mom was/is in the picture? is she smiling? who took the picture? i want more. i guess you hooked me. you teased me. good job.
on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
31 Jul 2002, 10:33 AM
you know you love apple pie.... J baked a fresh one and locked it in the pantry of desire, but left the window open just a crack so its sinful steam would steal silently, secretly, deviously... until, having infused its essence, you surrender your soul... leaving you nude. with pie crumbs ornamenting your dark triangle of shame.
on would i be considered crazy by silvertongueddevil
31 Jul 2002, 10:04 AM
ode to obsession and passion overwhelming. i grok. aside: read 'perfume' (a novel) by patrick susskind.
on frustration is the lamp i'm holding by silvertongueddevil
31 Jul 2002, 9:24 AM
lamplighter, bring me a lamp.
i like being turned around like that, and told a secret.
i like being turned around like that, and told a secret.
on Zen by necroscope7
31 Jul 2002, 8:38 AM
heh. a 'physically challenged' paranoid zen lumberjack. don't that beat all.
on HOW DO I WRITE by kawakurdi
31 Jul 2002, 6:50 AM
i like the idea very much, but i think the final stanza loses steam a bit. it's more...vernacular, maybe, than the images you paint in the rest of the poem
on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
31 Jul 2002, 6:39 AM
i'm ALWAYS nude. it makes the day go smoothe. ly. um. er. mmm. -=Dark_Angel=-, keep churning em out. keep reminding us of our *essential* baseness. keep your dart gun pointed at ignorants. [sic] p.s. who holds the key to unlock your nudity?
on I Hate You by mytenderrage
30 Jul 2002, 9:14 AM
stain upon my screen / her emotions manifest, / scathe my jellied orbs.
on I Hate You by mytenderrage
30 Jul 2002, 7:28 AM
so, you got dumped. you wrote this to help process the pain. very constructive. maybe your therapist would have been a more receptive audience than the crowd here?
last time i checked, poetry utilized metaphor to express ideas.
maybe he dumped you because you have no imagination???
last time i checked, poetry utilized metaphor to express ideas.
maybe he dumped you because you have no imagination???
on Ode to Bad poetry by unknown
26 Jul 2002, 6:54 AM
so, what do you care about?
on Wounded by RobinGayle
22 Jul 2002, 9:18 AM
how many times does will you take it, as a woman, before the healing begins?
on wednesday night after church by unknown
18 Jul 2002, 12:47 PM
ah. the 'good' life...
on she wonders, by <~>
17 Jul 2002, 7:15 AM
exactly the effect i was hoping for...