Re: Few Too Little by talking_goldfish	8-Aug-02/11:26 AM
fire, earth, water, AIR. then maybe self. if you're going to get elemental on us, that is.
Re: spending time on the beach as the world comes sneezing to an end (Thursday afternoon) by unknown	8-Aug-02/7:38 AM
nothing like a good apocalypse to brightenm up one's day.
Re: Becoming Indifferent by hmph	8-Aug-02/7:05 AM
i'm confused...wouldn't that be you?
Re: Two Eagles by Frass	7-Aug-02/9:09 PM
the sounds these words make are lovely. the glint of the sun blinds me.
Re: 22nd Anniversary by Frass	7-Aug-02/9:07 PM
nice, the way 'bitter' has a positive aspect in this piece. shapes my view of her more than any other, except maybe the last
Re: Satan wants me for a scarecrow by bondjedi	7-Aug-02/8:03 PM
do i sense a little poem rancor?
Re: Unsaid by Revekka	7-Aug-02/6:51 AM
when the unspoken outs, it breaks or it heals. either way, the tension leaves. do it.
Re: unidentified by <~>	6-Aug-02/12:44 PM
UPBs--unidentified party bruises.
Re: Mary Mother by DevilTmptrss	6-Aug-02/7:43 AM
mother goose be damned. there's a new kid in town: DevilTmptrss
Re: Virgin Poet by emilyowey	6-Aug-02/7:36 AM
ignorance is bliss, emily, but do you want to be an Eloi? live. feel. endure. rise. the air will taste sweeter, the birds will enchant you, and the ocean will heave your sobs upon the senseless shores...you will harden; you will pulse; you will find new ways to love.
Re: Self-Rebellion, revised by emilyowey	6-Aug-02/7:27 AM
you had me, up until 'evil plans'. then, it fell apart for me. a 6 for you: 100% for the first half, and a pittance for the rest.
Re: loki's end by yarlgrenn	6-Aug-02/7:18 AM
tie me up, tie me down, i was with you 'til the end. 10 for you, for sucking me in. the pleasure, the pain... yes. more like this, please.
Re: esopus creek by unknown	5-Aug-02/11:49 AM
dive right in.
Re: between you and me there is nothing by silvertongueddevil	1-Aug-02/8:08 PM
a pearl.
Re: Concrete by beakism	1-Aug-02/8:06 PM
maybe, if i had a penis i would understand what settle meant too. concrete good. kicking bad. i get that part anyway.
Re: incidentally, all royalties to the estate of WCW by lilli	1-Aug-02/7:44 PM
you are forgiven. they were obviously deniers well spent.
Re: Stone by ErgoErgun	1-Aug-02/7:21 PM
almost there...carve a little deeper...polish it
Re: Saturation Point by malakin	1-Aug-02/6:44 PM
you might find out that you're Human, and that would be scary.
Re: the mattress is a magnet by silvertongueddevil	1-Aug-02/6:36 PM
oh. so close. i got all excited--i thought i might have stumbled upon a vilanelle! but it was not to be... <sigh> a nice effort just the same.
Re: BURNHAM BEECHES by longships	1-Aug-02/2:41 PM
so you are bound to your freedom, for now... trees live slower lives than we do, and i wonder, can they sense us, cutting and caressing them? do they feel the loss of love, of life? walk on, as long as you have strength.