poemranker ::20 most recent comments by <~> (1921-1940) and replies

Comments by<~>, 1921–1940 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Few Too Little by talking_goldfish 8 Aug 2002, 11:26 AM
fire, earth, water, AIR. then maybe self. if you're going to get elemental on us, that is.
nothing like a good apocalypse to brightenm up one's day.
on Becoming Indifferent by hmph 8 Aug 2002, 7:05 AM
i'm confused...wouldn't that be you?
on Two Eagles by Frass 7 Aug 2002, 9:09 PM
the sounds these words make are lovely. the glint of the sun blinds me.
on 22nd Anniversary by Frass 7 Aug 2002, 9:07 PM
nice, the way 'bitter' has a positive aspect in this piece. shapes my view of her more than any other, except maybe the last
on Satan wants me for a scarecrow by bondjedi 7 Aug 2002, 8:03 PM
do i sense a little poem rancor?
on Unsaid by Revekka 7 Aug 2002, 6:51 AM
when the unspoken outs, it breaks or it heals. either way, the tension leaves. do it.
on unidentified by <~> 6 Aug 2002, 12:44 PM
UPBs--unidentified party bruises.
on Mary Mother by DevilTmptrss 6 Aug 2002, 7:43 AM
mother goose be damned. there's a new kid in town: DevilTmptrss
on Virgin Poet by emilyowey 6 Aug 2002, 7:36 AM
ignorance is bliss, emily, but do you want to be an Eloi? live. feel. endure. rise. the air will taste sweeter, the birds will enchant you, and the ocean will heave your sobs upon the senseless shores...you will harden; you will pulse; you will find new ways to love.
on Self-Rebellion, revised by emilyowey 6 Aug 2002, 7:27 AM
you had me, up until 'evil plans'. then, it fell apart for me. a 6 for you: 100% for the first half, and a pittance for the rest.
on loki's end by yarlgrenn 6 Aug 2002, 7:18 AM
tie me up, tie me down, i was with you 'til the end. 10 for you, for sucking me in. the pleasure, the pain... yes. more like this, please.
on esopus creek by unknown 5 Aug 2002, 11:49 AM
dive right in.
a pearl.
on Concrete by beakism 1 Aug 2002, 8:06 PM
maybe, if i had a penis i would understand what settle meant too. concrete good. kicking bad. i get that part anyway.
you are forgiven. they were obviously deniers well spent.
on Stone by ErgoErgun 1 Aug 2002, 7:21 PM
almost there...carve a little deeper...polish it
on Saturation Point by malakin 1 Aug 2002, 6:44 PM
you might find out that you're Human, and that would be scary.
on the mattress is a magnet by silvertongueddevil 1 Aug 2002, 6:36 PM
oh. so close. i got all excited--i thought i might have stumbled upon a vilanelle! but it was not to be... <sigh> a nice effort just the same.
on BURNHAM BEECHES by longships 1 Aug 2002, 2:41 PM
so you are bound to your freedom, for now... trees live slower lives than we do, and i wonder, can they sense us, cutting and caressing them? do they feel the loss of love, of life? walk on, as long as you have strength.