on The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum
17 Aug 2002, 10:39 PM
why?
on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
23 Aug 2002, 5:50 PM
make them shorter bastard. And where the fuck are Ramu and Sita and roger red hat. You fucker mother said my reading was getting better. But when you write such long writtings i get angry cause i'm only on no.12
on Pretending by temptalia
23 Aug 2002, 6:10 PM
yeah big fat zero, ye big fat zero. you make me weep. mother bring a tissue. No not really 10/10
on World Crashes Down by SoulSlippedAway
23 Aug 2002, 8:21 PM
oh dirk let me sup on your angel delight once more. Umh tangy
on -=Dark_Angel=- & The Canon Episcopi by Bachus
23 Aug 2002, 6:06 PM
Oh do stop reposting your super lovely good time poems, let the masses stumble on them as if by chance, than they would gain more enjoyment, and we could all explode in the the great enjoyment of fiscal south african queens
on Reflected, Dreamed by Frass
23 Aug 2002, 7:19 PM
thats what counts? if you don't know what its about whats the point? Oh lovely use of words, sorry i don't get you but it was rather well argued wasn't it chaps?
Yelp. What was that, oh i think it was a little puppy. Frass i think your super. 7/10
Yelp. What was that, oh i think it was a little puppy. Frass i think your super. 7/10
on some deleted poem
23 Aug 2002, 6:49 PM
ok if i'm wrong please give me a full explanation, if so you've failed, cause even if you don't want to appeal to the lowest common denominator you surely want to at least appeal to the supremly lackluster. If my synopsys is right what more critique do you needed, what more critique do you needed, what more critique do you needed, what more critique do you needed,what more critique do you needed, what more critique do you needed, what more critique do you needed, what more critique do you needed, what more critique do you needed,what more critique do you needed. Just remember Ramu and Sita, rodger red hat, and billy blue balls
on Pretending by temptalia
23 Aug 2002, 7:58 PM
Yeah Gods ball and chain. Oh i'd appreciate it if you commented on my poem. You are a fucking hippy GB&C in the updated 60's meaning of the wor/l/d
on Adolescence by PoeticDelicacy
23 Aug 2002, 8:29 PM
Come on GB&C don't be a hippy. Practice what you preach, advise on the poem don't just slate. Then we'll all improve and things will be pink and rosey.
on Letter Harmony by webguy
23 Aug 2002, 6:27 PM
Betwixt is an super word and has only become despised cause not many people use it. The more people use it the more they hear it the better they like it the more it gets used. Its like Gas instead of petrol, and sidewalk instead of pavement who cares so long as we know what you mean. Otherwise nasty
on My purple headed womb ferret by ==Doylum
23 Aug 2002, 6:37 PM
Yes the unpretentious can see for miles, and yes my ryhmes are sublime thank you for your rank
on Communal ranking by ==Doylum
23 Aug 2002, 7:06 PM
i haven't had a drink in minutes dearest my liver is in tip top condition. I'm afraid i can't accept your offer of a date i'm otherwise engaged on that night, but do keep trying and one day i may be able to fit you in.
on The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum
20 Aug 2002, 5:09 PM
i've never been through a blood hound, neither have i ever thrown one. If you'd noticed my penchant is for two legged beasts (beasts being the operative word), but don't let that stop you, presumabley they wouldn't get to upset, whats that saying of yours. don't worry darling, I'm SMALL in your SMALL arse, or something of that ilke. No i'm sure the hounds wouldn't mind. Time, Yes tricky to get ones head round, however we don't all operate on "central time" some of us live elsewhere than the centre of the universe.
on The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum
17 Aug 2002, 10:29 PM
yes then cicterian it is
on The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum
17 Aug 2002, 10:23 PM
what kind of robes do they wear
on some deleted poem
23 Aug 2002, 6:21 PM
so to sum up I'm a right case and i can even decide how to end it. Yes?
on saving myself for marriage by Venus
23 Aug 2002, 8:11 PM
Surely taco meat would loosen it even better. Just turn to hymen 79 and sing for all your worth. The good lord will provide - as long as your not a prody.
on The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum
17 Aug 2002, 10:45 PM
ok, but then im going to bed, its 7 in the morning.