poemranker ::20 most recent comments by ==Doylum (141-160) and replies

Comments by==Doylum, 141–160 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Charles and Eddie by Nicholas Jones 4 Feb 2003, 8:18 AM
Would i lie to you baby would i lie to you?
oh yeah
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on Feeling by chicka_babe05 4 Feb 2003, 8:14 AM
This is great. God i wish i could write like you, but as many will confirm i always end up producing a load of old rubbish.

Just one small suggestion, perhaps you could change the last three words to "I wub wou"
replying on The shirt I wore to dinner. by Jeremi B. Handrinos 4 Feb 2003, 7:45 AM
stop it with the racyism, and the ruderies. No neeed. Perhaps you could have said

Utter suger. 1. You attempt to shock, but just leave me cold, safe in the knowledge I have discovered yet another dumb flunk.

or

Utter slop. 1. You attempt to shock, but just leave me cold, safe in the knowledge I have discovered yet another dumb twot.

or

Utter tripe. 1. You attempt to shock, but just leave me cold, safe in the knowledge I have discovered yet another dumb waiter.
replying on Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos 4 Feb 2003, 7:35 AM
Ooooh get her!!!
replying on Me and My Girl by NinjaPoet 4 Feb 2003, 7:30 AM
I though you made it up. But you didn't. It exists. Somebody actually went and did it. They spent their time making a site to about poo. You go there and...... rate poo.
Jolly good.
replying on Cloak Of Love by brokenwing 4 Feb 2003, 7:24 AM
love IS.

i have known despair; we smile every time we meet. and i always lose.

i no longer lay the blame for my own limitations on love.

we are love. we often forget this.

so, in that respect, we are contained by love because we are no more and no less than it.

Thats why -=Dark_Angel=- so just think on
Besides other topics aren't super and lovely enough to be made into poems, only love is truely poetic!!!!!
on Cloak Of Love by brokenwing 4 Feb 2003, 7:16 AM
she chopped it off?
Just cause you had a quick handshandy?
How awful.
Can i have it for my collection of peni through the ages?
replying on poemrancour by JakeBike 4 Feb 2003, 7:12 AM
yeah silly girl, cause zeros done lots of stuff, and if you can't work out who it is then your really silly, so there. I think you should spend all your time trying to work out who writes stuff under different user names, afterall its such a clever concept!!!!!!!!!!JIOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLJIGTIPTopOfTheMorinToYou
on 42 by brazen 4 Feb 2003, 6:13 AM
do you thumb at me sir?
replying on Excommunication by inch of candle - Jesus wants me for a bum ream. An narrative in so many verses that madam palms readings have been savarlay curtailed by ==Doylum 2 Jan 2003, 6:12 PM
You didn't even read my words. If you had you would not have thanked jesus. However, since you seem to love even Dirk++@ fancy a bag of chips?
on Masculine by temptalia 2 Jan 2003, 5:43 PM
i love this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
no no no no no no no no no no no no i love it with a passion
10outof1010outof1010outof1010outof1010outof1010outof1010outof1010outof1010outof1010outof10
replying on Am I Still Here? by Ranger 2 Jan 2003, 5:41 PM
twats being those who don't like your drafts?

I think i mustn't be a twat because i love you poem.

translucent as a pixie's dream
replying on Masculine by temptalia 2 Jan 2003, 5:35 PM
how about chapped lips from being out on the street all night?
replying on Some Things by Christof 2 Jan 2003, 5:33 PM
oh my dear handshandy your not the big tongued kitchen freak in disguise are you?
on the rapier by <~> 28 Dec 2002, 7:53 PM
where do all commetns go when they die?
where ae your mention of aids? lightening fast as they all should be
where is your verse about Botte de Nuit?
replying on Things by Quarton 28 Dec 2002, 6:10 PM
I think for a assembly line bike company you couldn't go far wrong with Raleigh. They have, incidentally, just moved their operations from Nottingham, to the far east. Bejesus knows where.

all those slanty eyed buggers look the same to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh my good christ!!!!!!!!!!! and also spaek zzzzzzhatsits***((()_(_()((_@@@@@@@:@:@LLL:LL::IHJHK:@~:~@

Also, Quarton don't listen either poet, or nowits. Dash sorry, birthmark, oh no almost blew you. no, no blew your cover.
YOU must read Birthmarks usual recommendations:
Barbara, C:
1976. Tccl Binding, London.
Gaskell, J:
1985. Hodder & Stoughton, London
Jilly C:
2002. Bantam Press, London.

I forget the titles but any search will find the relevant infomation
replying on Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum 28 Dec 2002, 6:06 PM
oh great. Thanks!. 0010010

Yeah that works much much better.

Care for some afterschool ringsting?
replying on Oh my gosh what was that? by ==Doylum 28 Dec 2002, 5:28 PM
Does your wood really have corn and browne bits upon it? Why my dear fellow one could almost surmise that you own an home of sexual. Are you indeed an homeowner?
replying on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 17 Dec 2002, 4:05 PM
no we're not all pretentious fucks, unless you most wilfully misuse the word. And no i'm not who i think you are thank my old wrinkly mans bollocks. You claiming to be omnipresent?
replying on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 17 Dec 2002, 3:50 PM
i see - take you back. whats that got to do with licking wounds?
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