on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 8:15 AM
I wondered why Ann Diamond more. Mark Owen actually made the best solo song of any ex-Take-That member. But it was still shit.
on Time to Kill by Shin-Bojangles
19 Nov 2002, 4:52 AM
The barn owl and the tawny owl - they're the main two.
on Ulrika-ka-ka (In Utero, track 4) by Tascobar
7 Nov 2002, 4:44 AM
Nice. But I don't get the Nirvana reference.
on some deleted poem
15 Nov 2002, 3:32 AM
I know where to find wisdom. But it's a secret. Send me ??1,000,000 and I might let you know.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 8:16 AM
I don't do voodoo, but I do do judo. As Vic and Bob might say.
on some deleted poem
22 Nov 2002, 3:32 AM
I think your subject matter kind of overwhelms the poem. There are are some very good images and phrases, but I'm not sure it hangs together.
on Orange Hills (Villanelle) by Moss
20 Nov 2002, 1:34 AM
I'm unconvinced this is actually a villanelle, but then I'm an incorrigible pedant. It is pretty good, though; the first stanza is by far the best. Have you been reading the great Dylan? He was fond of his womb images.
on Duff by Off_Chance
19 Nov 2002, 4:50 AM
Duff Beer for you
Duff Beer for me
You have a Duff
I'll have one too.
Duff Beer for me
You have a Duff
I'll have one too.
on Litany of the Mullet by Shin-Bojangles
19 Nov 2002, 4:51 AM
I think the fish must be offended by being compared to the haircut. Who had the best mullet in history? I vote for Kevin Keegan
on some deleted poem
15 Nov 2002, 3:30 AM
Not as good as part one. You're losing your touch. I can't help it that my encyclopaedic knowledge of popular culture enabled me to spot your plagiarism. By the way, Tom Jones is a twat.
on some deleted poem
15 Nov 2002, 3:26 AM
Abraham Lincoln didn't fart. Nor does the Queen. I'm not sure if Tony does or not. Alistair Campbell certainly does.
on My love for another. by cleverdevice
15 Nov 2002, 4:09 AM
This isn't a sonnet. It ain't iambic. There's nothing wrong with it, but it's not a sonnet. Call it something else.
on some deleted poem
8 Nov 2002, 2:18 AM
Stick that up your bollocks! (as Roy Keane said to Mick McCarthy)
on Perversions by razorgrin
8 Nov 2002, 2:25 AM
Wow. That's original.
on Fit for a King by dougsoderstrom
7 Nov 2002, 4:37 AM
There once was a strange man called George
Who from nowhere could fashion a war
He won notoriety
And caused much hilarity
His words he was forced to disgorge.
Who from nowhere could fashion a war
He won notoriety
And caused much hilarity
His words he was forced to disgorge.
on some deleted poem
7 Nov 2002, 4:42 AM
And you started so well! Evil dictators should be tried by international tribunals, not stabbed in the eyes with forks. We should start with trying Bush for war crimes in Afghanistan.
I like the self-censorship of writing f*cking. What are you scared of?
I like the self-censorship of writing f*cking. What are you scared of?
on some deleted poem
7 Nov 2002, 4:48 AM
Man City are indeed a mighty team, but not as mighty as the very mighty Stockport County.
on Cantos part mmx (The Mud Poem) by bondjedi
7 Nov 2002, 4:52 AM
Ezra would have been proud. The dirty fascist.
on Emotionless by Roisin
7 Nov 2002, 4:53 AM
Nice. You combine the haiku with concrete poetry - the poem is jagged because of the lenght of the middle line.