on some deleted poem
12 Aug 2003, 10:58 PM
hmm....
nice imagery
i can't wait for more
nice imagery
i can't wait for more
on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8
22 Jul 2003, 11:49 PM
ah...fucking zero giving haters dolling out 0s out of spite
my own 'poem' was hit up with blue zeros
oh well
i dont' care
it wasn't even a poem
it was a house
:(
my own 'poem' was hit up with blue zeros
oh well
i dont' care
it wasn't even a poem
it was a house
:(
on Speaking my mind. Brilliant Idea! by thepinkbunnyofdoom
12 Aug 2003, 11:33 PM
oh wow the first part
blew me away
blew me away
on Moosefart's Revenge by wwFrasier Allonbyww
4 Aug 2003, 1:29 PM
i dont' have 8 names....
i thougth she liked my rewrite :(
i'm going to cry
i thougth she liked my rewrite :(
i'm going to cry
on A parking lot, a smoke, and the pleasure of being alone by thepinkbunnyofdoom
5 Aug 2003, 1:39 PM
no eyebrows and a cameltoe sounds more interesting and diverse...haha...i just don't like how 13 sounds.
on some deleted poem
1 Aug 2003, 9:55 AM
lol
but how is the walrus gay?
you should have him stradling a rainbow with his back flippers.
or suckign off another walrus' tusks
but how is the walrus gay?
you should have him stradling a rainbow with his back flippers.
or suckign off another walrus' tusks
on some deleted poem
31 Jul 2003, 12:42 AM
Your Best Yet
on My Last Plea by Inconceivable_Dreams
31 Jul 2003, 1:09 AM
all the rhyming takes away from your poem
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2003, 10:44 PM
lol
"PoemShootDown"
not that catchy
you know what you can't expect fuckers to be nice all the time. accept the fucking ridicule it will fade over time. every newbie goes thru this little phase of being picked out. GET OVER IT!
and why do you care about what jobless fuckers who check the comments list every 5 seconds of therif life think about your peoms!!!!!! write for yourself. even if i think your peotry sucks, but you keep writing i will respect you. and i'm sure others will too.
oh yeah btw
go fuck yourself too
"PoemShootDown"
not that catchy
you know what you can't expect fuckers to be nice all the time. accept the fucking ridicule it will fade over time. every newbie goes thru this little phase of being picked out. GET OVER IT!
and why do you care about what jobless fuckers who check the comments list every 5 seconds of therif life think about your peoms!!!!!! write for yourself. even if i think your peotry sucks, but you keep writing i will respect you. and i'm sure others will too.
oh yeah btw
go fuck yourself too
on The Missing Love by loveisendless
29 Jul 2003, 9:59 PM
WOW! THIS POEM TOUCHED ME IN THE MOSTEST DEEPEST PLACES!
HERE"S A 10!!!!!!
HERE"S A 10!!!!!!
on There's no point by LosT SykoPath
24 Jul 2003, 10:47 PM
Donnie: I promise one day everything will be better for you.
on some deleted poem
24 Jul 2003, 1:37 AM
i agree with stephen
too many hippie poems
too many hippie poems
on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8
24 Jul 2003, 1:42 AM
ahh this poem has finally made it to the heap of trash known as the BEST
lets see how quickly the blue zeros shall knock you off again
sad
lets see how quickly the blue zeros shall knock you off again
sad
on knott's berry farm, jam & polaroids by <{Baba^Yaga}>
23 Jul 2003, 8:36 PM
i used to love that park
and it's jam
but they tricked me with the fake gold they make you pan out of a disgusting trough
:(
and it's jam
but they tricked me with the fake gold they make you pan out of a disgusting trough
:(
on There's no point by LosT SykoPath
24 Jul 2003, 10:44 PM
"You're born"
"You're hear torn"
ahh the life sucks poem
take some tylenol
chase it with a shot of cuervo
and hit the sack
it'll be all better tommorow
Dr. Lilian Thurman: The search for God is absurd?
Donnie: It is if everyone dies alone.
(donnie darko)
"You're hear torn"
ahh the life sucks poem
take some tylenol
chase it with a shot of cuervo
and hit the sack
it'll be all better tommorow
Dr. Lilian Thurman: The search for God is absurd?
Donnie: It is if everyone dies alone.
(donnie darko)
on Moosefart's Revenge by wwFrasier Allonbyww
4 Aug 2003, 1:27 PM
YES!
FREE ADVERTISING!
FREE ADVERTISING!
on some deleted poem
24 Aug 2003, 10:15 PM
i love you
remember me? durt
well i'm back
and i still love you
remember me? durt
well i'm back
and i still love you
on Moosefart's Revenge by wwFrasier Allonbyww
4 Aug 2003, 1:28 PM
btw, she's a fucking ugly cunt
on some deleted poem
1 Aug 2003, 9:53 AM
dammit i am jealous
NICE
Can you look for the drained corpse of that lil bee, museheart, in that web of yours? I cannot find her anywhere.