on Memorial Park by Mona Lisa
14 Aug 2003, 2:51 AM
Very nice
on some deleted poem
12 Aug 2003, 9:29 AM
nICE
on some deleted poem
19 Jul 2003, 4:47 AM
A real life changer.
on My Angel of Darkness by goddessbyfire
19 Jul 2003, 4:48 AM
a vivid and eclectic write let down by 'crimson' as a metaphor its a bit k-mart. 7
on some deleted poem
4 Jul 2003, 4:04 AM
I just think you excel at describing stuff, this is soaked in beautiful verse 8
on Lycanthropes and L-dopamine by horus8
4 Jul 2003, 4:02 AM
Only you can do a Haiku with a title like this. Your f****g nuts but I'm nuts for your stuff 8
on Fall Of The Heartlands by Mr Pig
4 Jul 2003, 4:15 AM
No dots are needed between JCB
on some deleted poem
28 Jun 2003, 10:15 AM
oohh you billy bunter
(silly cun*ter) now thats cockney me ole cocksparra
(silly cun*ter) now thats cockney me ole cocksparra
on some deleted poem
28 Jun 2003, 10:16 AM
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on Ack Bassward, or something like that by thepinkbunnyofdoom
28 Jun 2003, 10:17 AM
Liked a few lines big time,
but I can't take this in right now i'm so tired my eyes look like piss holes in the snow. 7
but I can't take this in right now i'm so tired my eyes look like piss holes in the snow. 7
on Sunset Hands by Bachus
28 Jun 2003, 10:22 AM
You write so prolifically when do you get chance to eat? have sex? If I lived in CA i would be knocking golf balls of the tops of skyscrapers whilst listening to Verdi, or chilling out eating diaper dogs pretending i'm david hasslehoff.
ahh you guys have a great life or have i done too much soap?
Loved the anger in this, your so fucking in ya face kinda expressive maniac. 9
ahh you guys have a great life or have i done too much soap?
Loved the anger in this, your so fucking in ya face kinda expressive maniac. 9
on The Gecko, and the Italian book collector by horus8
23 Jun 2003, 6:37 AM
And God said let it rain 10s.
on Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8
21 Jun 2003, 9:37 AM
Before I collapse of exhaustion please let me say : Yeah baby.
Your head should be a holiday destination I would be there with my Piz Buin and a pile of tabloids licking the suns lashes. 10
Your head should be a holiday destination I would be there with my Piz Buin and a pile of tabloids licking the suns lashes. 10
on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig
21 Jun 2003, 9:42 AM
Fuck !
on Dressing up by thepinkbunnyofdoom
17 Jun 2003, 9:06 AM
Will i be handsome,
will i be rich,
here's what she said to me,
kay sara, sara,
whatever will be, will be
the futures not ours to see,
kay sara sara.
Is this a sequel if it is then cor blimey its great?
will i be rich,
here's what she said to me,
kay sara, sara,
whatever will be, will be
the futures not ours to see,
kay sara sara.
Is this a sequel if it is then cor blimey its great?
on Air sickness bag by Shardik
17 Jun 2003, 9:01 AM
Change line 10 to Twas about the time' I think it adds a bit more garlic to the salt the pygmies used.
Pretty funny
8 :-)
Pretty funny
8 :-)
on Dressing up by thepinkbunnyofdoom
17 Jun 2003, 9:05 AM
Didn't like it ! to much will i this and made me not care about living. 3
on A Love Story For The Dead by Caducus
21 Jun 2003, 9:38 AM
Brilliant
on The Blooding by Mr Pig
25 Jul 2003, 12:39 PM
AwEsOmE