on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
12 Jun 2003, 1:42 PM
Nice.
on some deleted poem
12 Jun 2003, 1:41 PM
This is pointless, true, but not a poem.
on some deleted poem
14 Jun 2003, 7:51 AM
Not bad. Had a tough time following the rhyme scheme and the beat threw me off. But overall not bad ***6
on some deleted poem
14 Jun 2003, 7:52 AM
I like the way its layed out. Pretty well written, but its gonna need more to carry much wieght, maybe some explanation; its tough to follow. ***6
on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
14 Jun 2003, 11:06 AM
What is this supposed to be? Its a random, half introspection inspired and begun with a third grade rhyme. True, I don't like you and think you are an idiot, but this poem deserves low marks anyways.
on Sweet, Sweet... Daddy by Jeremi B. Handrinos
13 Jun 2003, 2:48 PM
Wow, that's pretty bad. The poem makes an attempt at something important, but falls far short. In your comments, and your poem you lack syntax and proper grammar. Find a new hobby.
on My girl by simone_girard
12 Jun 2003, 1:39 PM
Wow, that had some potential, had some good points, but you tried to hard to rhyme it and so it all fell apart. Good effort though.