replying on Dance Of Insanity by forsaken
6 May 2012, 2:15 PM
Who're a moron this poem is about growing up, about killing the boy inside you
on Breathless by misused
20 Apr 2008, 10:50 AM
I really like this one
Thanks, I liked yours. It reminds me of things I once and well sometimes still do feel. I know you don't know me, but I try my best to help people. I guess you could say I feel I need to make up for my past, so if you ever want someone to talk to who's gone through alot and you'll ever have to meet. You can always hit me up on myspace, my address his on my page here.
replying on Be The One by forsaken
17 Oct 2007, 8:29 PM
It's a bt strange cause she still means has much has she always has, but I just don't think of her that way. Maybe I realize I couldn't hurt her just being her friend if that makes sense, so I just stop thinking for her that way.
replying on Losing you by forsaken
17 Oct 2007, 8:07 PM
Well I'm sorry they do
replying on Be The One by forsaken
17 Oct 2007, 8:03 PM
Actually she has become my best friend and even though her felings still mean the world to me. I've learned that I'm more then happy just being friends.
replying on Lonely Soul by faded_twilight
13 Jul 2007, 8:54 PM
You still out there I haven't read these you so long. Don't ask me why cause I don't either, but I'd like to hear from you?
replying on Be The One by forsaken
14 Dec 2006, 1:19 PM
No offence taking, and yeah she isn't with me and most likly ever will be. Even though I know this I still long for her as I've done since the first time I saw her on Oct. 8, 05.
on Lonely Soul by faded_twilight
20 Apr 2005, 2:18 PM
I like this poem as I did your Hurting Heart one. I wish you had more on here, since I enjoy these more then any others. There's something about poems about being alone that always catch my eye. Do you have more on a different site?
on No One by sk8boardandpoems
10 Apr 2005, 1:24 PM
I've ment someone who skated and wrote poems before, up in Maine. When I was going to school, I doubt it, but I wonder could that be you. She also was angeered by the refrence of being like Avril. That aside I do like this poem if that what you'd like to call it. Maybe more like a quick shoot of your mind set at the time. Maybe something longer about how it feels to be alone, without anyone to fill some of that emptiness inside.
replying on Dance Of Insanity by forsaken
1 Oct 2004, 6:34 AM
Well it is about getting a part of you out of your body.
on Gethsemane (or, Jesus learns what's up with dying) by zodiac
19 Feb 2004, 4:01 PM
I've read four of your others poems not voting, because the ideas of them we'ren't my cup of tea.
This one was really good, and maybe the others were too but they just shit in my eyes. At lease they are after reading this one.
This one was really good, and maybe the others were too but they just shit in my eyes. At lease they are after reading this one.
on Holding on for Jesus by Everyone
19 Feb 2004, 3:25 PM
To be honest I don't believe in Jesus, and I have 666 on my neck. I give you 9, becuase it's good and it's possible that there's a Jesus. If I did believe a 10 would have fit, but sadly I don't believe in something I don't understand.
on Border towns & the runs by horus8
18 Jul 2003, 6:57 AM
This is great, plus it sounds like back home in Arizona. Living in the poor part with all the Mexicans, I've seen a lot of bald spics with tattos.(10)
on New school nursery rhymes by DeadtotheWorld
18 Jul 2003, 6:48 AM
You're just fucking around with stuff what made childhood easier to get though. Plus its a simple copy, not even of anything great. Excapt of memories of being young and blind to the World of Hate.(0)
replying on HATE by forsaken'sbigbro
16 Jul 2003, 5:37 AM
What's so sad? That's how most of america is.
on The Gecko, and the Italian book collector by horus8
24 Jun 2003, 12:32 PM
What about T-paper, this is way worse then my insanity.