on Brittanyy by JoyLuck
30 Jul 2003, 11:19 PM
HAH! 10!
on A Simple Emote. by thepinkbunnyofdoom
29 Jul 2003, 2:03 AM
I liked the presentation.. 7.
on some deleted poem
28 Jul 2003, 12:51 PM
I liked this, soothing flow and feel. Good Job. 9.
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2003, 6:52 PM
Brit, please now.. dont be such a sensitive bitch.. like horus said, dont write for us.. write for yourself, and when we slam it into a wastebasket, come back and write better, but dont write just to please us.. thats pointless, and will make me piss on your head even more. ok?
on Billy Bob Jo by Inconceivable_Dreams
31 Jul 2003, 1:02 AM
hrmm.. amusing read. 7.
on The difference between the two -=Dark_Angel=-'s by horus8
30 Jul 2003, 8:14 PM
ahhh.. burning blood and gore curdles in the mornin for breakfast.. yeah..
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2003, 9:19 PM
ah lifeboatman, i told you before, i killed cain!!! he went home a long time ago! ;P 10. wonderfull.. did that chat about cain on irc inspire you?
on And so the spider spun by horus8
30 Jul 2003, 7:24 PM
well, thom got sucked dry from horus8 the eight legged spider, and i smile wider in laughter, splashing in water, a child gone astray, named stinky! hehe. great job. 8.
on HANDRINOS IS A HUMOURLESS PRIG by walrus8
30 Jul 2003, 6:40 PM
eh... wtf. ok.. not sure what this is even sposed to be buts its stupid nontheless.
on Infection by nocturnalism
29 Jul 2003, 2:01 AM
Once apon a midnight moon
came a baker
a night walker
salt shaker, wavin her cheeks
hasnt showered in two weeks
I watched my friend pay
30 bucks thrown away
he pressed his lips
against her vertical smile
he ended up in a pool of bile
puking sour dough
There.. not the best rewrite, but i think it tops your piece nevertheless. ;)
came a baker
a night walker
salt shaker, wavin her cheeks
hasnt showered in two weeks
I watched my friend pay
30 bucks thrown away
he pressed his lips
against her vertical smile
he ended up in a pool of bile
puking sour dough
There.. not the best rewrite, but i think it tops your piece nevertheless. ;)
on Infection by nocturnalism
29 Jul 2003, 1:54 AM
cmon..i got the idea but you could of had more imagination with the presentation, it left me with a sensation of emptiness..5.
on The Set Back by horus8
28 Jul 2003, 3:37 PM
WAHOO! Heil HORUS! LEAD ME MY GENERAL! ONWARDS ONWARDS, TWARDS THE FUTURE.. i like the pictures though.. ;P 10.
on The plains of Africa by horus8
28 Jul 2003, 3:44 PM
Nice. Discovery channel narrative.. i enjoyed the read. 9.
on unlucky burglar, unlucky me by cacophony
28 Jul 2003, 3:49 PM
Aye, home protection kicks ass.. ;) 8.
on Wake me up before you go by INTRANSIT
27 Jul 2003, 6:46 PM
LMAO.. this sounded like a recorded dialogue between my two friends Robert and Nicole.. jesus christ, i couldnt stop laughin.. you got yourself a ten.
on Little Somethings by emeraldskies
27 Jul 2003, 7:27 PM
your now an adult.. not your fault, blame society, its easy. 7.
on summer feeling by nolan
28 Jul 2003, 1:16 AM
online journal or a poem? i cant tell the difference.
on plagiarism txt by daniella
30 Jul 2003, 7:54 PM
hmm. 7.
on some deleted poem
29 Jul 2003, 1:45 AM
Well, its a good read, but it didnt strike my fancy.. btw i came up with a cigar flavor for ice cream, i was thinking of calling it cubans.. ;P 8.