on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2003, 12:49 AM
I do not know who proved triumphant in the end... but it is good story telling... 10
on Discomfort by FoulSanctity
14 Aug 2003, 7:38 PM
How come men have more enjoyable bathroom experiences than women?? 9
on There can be only one by Shardik
6 Aug 2003, 8:41 PM
quite confusing... but this is said in the point-of-view of a buffoon... 10
on some deleted poem
6 Aug 2003, 8:35 PM
a donkey owned by a nymphomaniac... less grand but it works.. 10
on Rearview mirrors by horus8
14 Aug 2003, 7:48 PM
nice reeking stench of rancor... 8
on summer heat blues by peaceseeker
14 Aug 2003, 7:46 PM
nice ending there... 10
on some deleted poem
14 Aug 2003, 7:40 PM
No one's laughing... 0
on paint brush by highnightmaregurl
14 Aug 2003, 7:43 PM
you can do better than "you are my friend, pure as gold", otherwise, it is beautiful... 8
on some deleted poem
14 Aug 2003, 7:54 PM
to this editted version.. 8
on *******Perfect***** by Mona Lisa
14 Aug 2003, 8:02 PM
I don't know the technicalities of a Haiku... but it is a seductive concept you've put here... 10
on some deleted poem
14 Aug 2003, 8:05 PM
love it... especially how you plit presentense... 10
on How we found Jesus by Jeremi B. Handrinos
10 Aug 2003, 8:00 PM
don't leave us hanging.. i want to find Jesus too.. 10
on Maine Freeze by http://mulberryfairy
10 Aug 2003, 8:03 PM
loved it... very detailed description.. makes me want to see it too... 10
on Gaolbreak: Jade Marlboro by DreamerSupreme
10 Aug 2003, 7:34 PM
Anything with the world marlboro in it is great.. the ruby ones does it for me though.. 9.. yup.. robots
on Sagadahoc to Hudson by http://mulberryfairy
10 Aug 2003, 7:37 PM
lovely... 10
on some deleted poem
6 Aug 2003, 8:28 PM
10... good poem.. realyy good
on He Looks Great In Lycra by GAY AS FU*K
6 Aug 2003, 8:32 PM
I really don't know what lycra is but... 8
on Emotion Dawns by Nightmare-Poet
7 Aug 2003, 12:52 AM
lot's o' good lines... though I do not see the coherence... maybe I am just dumb (and I am, mind you)... but I see hope... 9
on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2003, 12:54 AM
"justed" or "just"?? Nice personification... 8
on letting off angry emotions by LosT SykoPath
6 Aug 2003, 8:44 PM
nice tension... 9