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Gaolbreak: Jade Marlboro (Free verse) by DreamerSupreme
Saber-toothed kisses of peace are touted as I enter the cubicle city of my office building. Co-workers wave sweaty palms to communicate their ascetic politeness. Damned robots they are. They actually like the automat pink jello catered for us minimum wage beehive puppets. They appreciate every moment spent in this social prison, happy to be brown nosing the anal passage of the head manager. These proletariats snivel his toxic flatulence, inebriated by the possibility of a three dollar raise. My diacetylmorphine marinated body is thrown into a vinyl office chair. Tequila rolls in my desk drawer encased in a brown paper coat. 'Round noon-time I deserted the corporate stockade to smoke my zig-zag wrapped herbal green flora. Magic fungus clouds lace my bloody delta with elation, as I explore necromantic galaxies.

Up the ladder: 1967 Ford Carmine Jalopy
Down the ladder: Bookends

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.8333335
Weighted score: 5.7620006
Overall Rank: 1785
Posted: August 9, 2003 7:17 PM PDT; Last modified: August 9, 2003 7:17 PM PDT
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[9] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.146.65 | 9-Aug-03/9:33 PM | Reply
Yeah, I know what you mean. I was once a part of a cubicle community. I think you should call them proletarians. I didn't like the " 'round noon-time" part. I though noon-time was a New England saying (as if noon were something other than a time).
[n/a] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.176.46 > http://mulberryfairy | 9-Aug-03/10:07 PM | Reply
oh well, i was trying to add too many bells i guess. noted. thanks for the contribution of your opinion. ;)
[9] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 10-Aug-03/12:09 AM | Reply
Geez, that's what I call a snickers break.
[n/a] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.176.46 > Jeremi B. Handrinos | 10-Aug-03/12:33 AM | Reply
thats what i call "hold on a second"
repeated ever two or so minutes
;P
[n/a] Joe-joe @ 68.194.57.229 > DreamerSupreme | 10-Aug-03/5:53 AM | Reply
Oh what a profound inditement against the "social prison" of the corporate workplace where the "robots" carry out the orders of their opressors....bla bla bla. How creative....how profound!! In your next work please provide us all with enlightning news about the military industrial complex! Infintile....-6-
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.182.137 > Joe-joe | 10-Aug-03/7:56 PM | Reply
lol joe, your funny. ;)
[n/a] Joe-joe @ 170.28.4.4 > SupremeDreamer | 11-Aug-03/4:56 AM | Reply
I still love ya dreamster. Peace
[9] Lifeboatman @ 202.78.97.13 | 10-Aug-03/7:34 PM | Reply
Anything with the world marlboro in it is great.. the ruby ones does it for me though.. 9.. yup.. robots
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