poemranker ::Victoria Applesmack and the Easy to Clean Wonder-Spleen by T. Jonathron Remp

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Victoria Applesmack and the Easy to Clean Wonder-Spleen

Member since 2004 · Posted 20 Jul 2005 · 4 comments

I went to the bakery I went to the late great finger slate And wrote a poem about Life, the Universe, and Lemon Tang: Can you blame me For this pee- Colored liquid Which exists in the Universe (and Life is also involved) Then I sat next to the dead, rotting, body of a small invisible bacterium Which pretty much happens anytime you sit Unless you happen to be sitting next to one of the Mars Rovers Although new data suggest some bacteria may have survived the sterilization process

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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Jul-05/5:09 PM Reply
This poeme exudes excellence, though the title is a little too 'self-consciously zany' for my tastes. -10-
[n/a] T. Jonathron Remp › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Jul-05/10:42 AM Reply
Thank you! Yeah, the title gives it away
[n/a] Lenore 17-Oct-17/2:58 PM Reply
Tardigrades need friends too!
[n/a] T. Jonathron Remp › Lenore 17-Oct-17/3:08 PM Reply
Your liminal existence will be neither remembered nor forgotten but rather swallowed by presque-vu and digested into terminal nonexistence.